
11/14/2021 c1 catspats31
The writing quality is good in terms of your spelling and grammar, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken for being a second person or you-based story:
Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.
Please remove all of the elements related to the reader and replace them with a canon character or original character. Switch to first person or third person point of view. You can always put it on another site where it is allowed such as Archive Of Our Own.
The writing quality is good in terms of your spelling and grammar, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken for being a second person or you-based story:
Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.
Please remove all of the elements related to the reader and replace them with a canon character or original character. Switch to first person or third person point of view. You can always put it on another site where it is allowed such as Archive Of Our Own.
1/27/2020 c2 Demi clayton
I think you should write more, when you can as it is really good for, can you wrote more, when you can or if you want to that is. Please and thank you.
I think you should write more, when you can as it is really good for, can you wrote more, when you can or if you want to that is. Please and thank you.
11/10/2014 c2 Guest
Welp, I'm in trouble. Again. Please update soon, this fic is amazing! Can't wait for more fluff! (Jack will be mad at me, won't he? And the rest of the Guardians...) Yay
But please update soon!
Welp, I'm in trouble. Again. Please update soon, this fic is amazing! Can't wait for more fluff! (Jack will be mad at me, won't he? And the rest of the Guardians...) Yay
But please update soon!
7/27/2014 c2
2FrozenFanJelsa.snowflake97
PLEASE UPDATE! This fic is amazing and I am on the edge of my seat waiting for an update.

PLEASE UPDATE! This fic is amazing and I am on the edge of my seat waiting for an update.
2/28/2014 c2 Brook Messner
I hope you're working on the next couple chapters I was so looking forward to what was in the next chapter only to find out that there was no chapter 3 or 4 plz wright more
I hope you're working on the next couple chapters I was so looking forward to what was in the next chapter only to find out that there was no chapter 3 or 4 plz wright more
3/2/2014 c2
5brook.messner.3
This is amazing! Absolutely beautiful. So beautiful in fact that I'm crying well done plz update soon. Pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaase update!

This is amazing! Absolutely beautiful. So beautiful in fact that I'm crying well done plz update soon. Pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaase update!
3/1/2014 c2
5Rhapsoddity
Lemme guess- that problem turns out to be reader?
Eeee I am quite enjoying this fic, and it was well worth the wait :)

Lemme guess- that problem turns out to be reader?
Eeee I am quite enjoying this fic, and it was well worth the wait :)
2/15/2014 c1
5Rhapsoddity
Alright, you better uodate or else. This is a seriously amazing fic, and I really can't wait till chapter 2!

Alright, you better uodate or else. This is a seriously amazing fic, and I really can't wait till chapter 2!