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12/23/2013 c5 7Hypegiaphobia
The red cloaked man is soooooo creepy, It's hilarious! XD
11/27/2013 c5 Guest
Ranma x Nabiki x Kasumi
7/1/2013 c4 Guest
Ouch. Read up on an English language subject called 'run-on' sentences.
6/15/2013 c2 52brown phantom
Interesting start, and Rabiki sure is clever, moreso than RanNab. You could even try something like Rasumi or Rankyo or Rampoo, though that last one sounds weird to hear I admit. I'm interested in seeing the full effects of this change to these characters, especially in Kasumi. I suggest using the point on both Shampoo and Ukyo.
6/12/2013 c1 Doaeternal
Good start so far. Might want to edit the lyrics out of this chapter as it's a TOS violation. I don't know if is still trashing every songfic with lyrics they find but I wouldn't risk it. Other than that I really hope to see where this goes.
6/12/2013 c2 TheLastNanaya
How about keep Herb as female permanently? That could work. No need to write yaoi.
6/12/2013 c1 69ShadowRogue9799
can't wait for next chap
6/12/2013 c1 2Lucyole
interesting idea and first chapter man happosai just messed up like always please write the next chapter as fas as you can and upload it. *cookies for you*
6/12/2013 c1 4Druss the Legend
Interesting. I'll be following this story closely.

Bonus: no preference to Akane...

Ciao!
6/11/2013 c1 Guest
Too soon to tell, but Akane is not in the picture and Kasumi and Nabiki are on board. Me likey sor far.

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