for Sic Semper Tyrannis12/2/2022 c2 
8Bluerk9
"Hey, what can I say, I'm no boy-scout hero. I'm male, and I have a pulse. There are some seriously good-looking women on my screen. Don't blame me for biology."
Really? Is that really what you have him thinking about when looking at enslaved girls on his screen who have obviously been sold and raped? Biology is no excuse for him to ogle at women who are clearly uncomfortable and forced into slavery. I know this was written before the game's release, but that doesn't make this quote right.
8Bluerk9"Hey, what can I say, I'm no boy-scout hero. I'm male, and I have a pulse. There are some seriously good-looking women on my screen. Don't blame me for biology."
Really? Is that really what you have him thinking about when looking at enslaved girls on his screen who have obviously been sold and raped? Biology is no excuse for him to ogle at women who are clearly uncomfortable and forced into slavery. I know this was written before the game's release, but that doesn't make this quote right.
1/20/2016 c2 13Jade Ice Fire
I seriously hope you write more for this game. You've done a fantastic job of it here. Very engaging and enjoyable to read. Loved it!
13Jade Ice FireI seriously hope you write more for this game. You've done a fantastic job of it here. Very engaging and enjoyable to read. Loved it!
8/31/2014 c2 24Ashardalon125
A few discrepancies from the actual game, but seeing as this was written before, that's negligible. All in all, I preferred this to the actual game. If the game had turned out a fraction like this, it would have been better. At least you took time to explain Aiden's magic hacking.
24Ashardalon125A few discrepancies from the actual game, but seeing as this was written before, that's negligible. All in all, I preferred this to the actual game. If the game had turned out a fraction like this, it would have been better. At least you took time to explain Aiden's magic hacking.
6/8/2014 c2 13AuraPen
*claps* I felt happy tears spring to my eyes at the ending. I have no words to describe this, I read all of this for half an hour (I am a very fast reader) and I loved every single second of it. You captured Aiden's personality and tactics so well, and the little case you made was just perfect. Beautiful fanfic, my friend. I wish there was more.
13AuraPen*claps* I felt happy tears spring to my eyes at the ending. I have no words to describe this, I read all of this for half an hour (I am a very fast reader) and I loved every single second of it. You captured Aiden's personality and tactics so well, and the little case you made was just perfect. Beautiful fanfic, my friend. I wish there was more.
6/2/2014 c2 1Dracona Mortis
URRRRGH I loved the end! And I lost it at "Windows piece of shit" and "Welcome to Chicago motherfucker". Very nice touches :D
1Dracona MortisURRRRGH I loved the end! And I lost it at "Windows piece of shit" and "Welcome to Chicago motherfucker". Very nice touches :D
5/15/2014 c2 raindropdew
I'm loving it! I'm so excited for watch dogs already have it bought can't wait to go in on the 27th and get it! I'm pumped! And this story so far is awesome! And when the game comes out I can't wait to see the changes! Thank you for this! Definitely going in my favs! (:
I'm loving it! I'm so excited for watch dogs already have it bought can't wait to go in on the 27th and get it! I'm pumped! And this story so far is awesome! And when the game comes out I can't wait to see the changes! Thank you for this! Definitely going in my favs! (:
4/7/2014 c2 15MASTER T-REX
Sic Semper Tyrannis - thus, always, to tyrants
Coup de grace - blow of mercy
Loved your two chapters. I can't wait for the game! :D
15MASTER T-REXSic Semper Tyrannis - thus, always, to tyrants
Coup de grace - blow of mercy
Loved your two chapters. I can't wait for the game! :D
4/3/2014 c2 1KAOSmaster
No offense but I think writing a fanfic on a game that isn't released yet isn't really a good idea. I recommend waiting till the game releases, you buy it and know the whole story and then either delete this a rewrite or keep writing this and start a new one. I like this btw.
1KAOSmasterNo offense but I think writing a fanfic on a game that isn't released yet isn't really a good idea. I recommend waiting till the game releases, you buy it and know the whole story and then either delete this a rewrite or keep writing this and start a new one. I like this btw.
3/12/2014 c2 BikerSHAM
I Like this. Hellofa GOOD read !
Can't wait to play the game myself when it comes out in May.
Keep up the Great work !
/Salute, SHAM...8-)
I Like this. Hellofa GOOD read !
Can't wait to play the game myself when it comes out in May.
Keep up the Great work !
/Salute, SHAM...8-)
12/29/2013 c2 1Innoxious
interesting so far... the fight scene/s really reminded me of the "Sherlock Holmes" movie style of fight scenes.
1Innoxiousinteresting so far... the fight scene/s really reminded me of the "Sherlock Holmes" movie style of fight scenes.
9/15/2013 c2 2Felledor
While this is a fantastic piece, there's not much original stuff here. It's a retelling of the trailer. That said, there is some original things, such as how Pierce got in, the hostess's name, and the aftermath.
2FelledorWhile this is a fantastic piece, there's not much original stuff here. It's a retelling of the trailer. That said, there is some original things, such as how Pierce got in, the hostess's name, and the aftermath.
8/2/2013 c2 Will
Great story! please update as soon as you can. I love that you took the time to research and explain everything too. The way Aiden's mind works reminds me of reading good Batman comics. I like that
Great story! please update as soon as you can. I love that you took the time to research and explain everything too. The way Aiden's mind works reminds me of reading good Batman comics. I like that
6/30/2013 c2 cybernewbie202
Wow this is a good fan fiction for a game that yet to be release, good job I looking forward for the upcoming chapters.
Wow this is a good fan fiction for a game that yet to be release, good job I looking forward for the upcoming chapters.
6/25/2013 c2 9Rosefeather
Heeeeey there, fellow person obsessing over an unreleased game. lol
I like your first chapter, it's a cool introduction, sets the scene and the tone very nicely. I like the liberties you took describing the scene and lead up to the human trafficking bust. I don't especially like how you describe Aiden's attitude... He's cold hearted, but only because he despises what the human traffickers do, you make him sound like he's cynical about everything, which, granted, he may be, but I personally find him more likeable as portrayed in the trailer. He's bringing down a criminal in an unselfish way. I think he stands for more than just protecting his family and abusing a system that has abused him. But, take this for the opinion it is, I'm looking forward to the game, and certainly to reading more of this.
Happy Writing,
Rosefeather
9RosefeatherHeeeeey there, fellow person obsessing over an unreleased game. lol
I like your first chapter, it's a cool introduction, sets the scene and the tone very nicely. I like the liberties you took describing the scene and lead up to the human trafficking bust. I don't especially like how you describe Aiden's attitude... He's cold hearted, but only because he despises what the human traffickers do, you make him sound like he's cynical about everything, which, granted, he may be, but I personally find him more likeable as portrayed in the trailer. He's bringing down a criminal in an unselfish way. I think he stands for more than just protecting his family and abusing a system that has abused him. But, take this for the opinion it is, I'm looking forward to the game, and certainly to reading more of this.
Happy Writing,
Rosefeather