for Past After the End7/10/2018 c8 
30Aliemah
Enjoyed the story up to this point. I cant take the interruptions any more, though. I love the commentary but it really takes away from the story, and it's hard to follow along with.
30AliemahEnjoyed the story up to this point. I cant take the interruptions any more, though. I love the commentary but it really takes away from the story, and it's hard to follow along with.
2/27/2018 c37 1EvilCuttlefish
My goodness, you almost had me yelling at my phone for all the interruptions you kept throwing in. Good job!
1EvilCuttlefishMy goodness, you almost had me yelling at my phone for all the interruptions you kept throwing in. Good job!
6/30/2017 c37 Jordan
*reads the end
*starts clapping passionately
*reads the end
*starts clapping passionately
12/29/2016 c35 Guest
Stop squeezing my neck
Stop squeezing my neck
2/19/2016 c37 Saju3107
I loved this! You awesome girl! But now I need more
I'm totally lost in fiction about these stupid babys! It's hilarious to read about all the drama and smoching they do at the end
I loved this! You awesome girl! But now I need more
I'm totally lost in fiction about these stupid babys! It's hilarious to read about all the drama and smoching they do at the end
11/9/2015 c37 Guest
really good story but holy fuck, are your ramblings in the AN annoying and cringy as hell. tone it down man
really good story but holy fuck, are your ramblings in the AN annoying and cringy as hell. tone it down man
10/24/2015 c36 Guest
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