for artemis fowl love changes all8/23/2016 c11 Guest
I apologize for commenting on improving your grammar, even though I was simply giving a polite suggestion. Your writing is really amazing and creative, so don't let anything get in the way of it! :)
I apologize for commenting on improving your grammar, even though I was simply giving a polite suggestion. Your writing is really amazing and creative, so don't let anything get in the way of it! :)
8/23/2016 c9 Guest
This has been really good so far, however, I would suggest that you might try to fix the mistakes in spelling and grammar. Anyway, thanks for taking the time to write this! I am absolutely hooked!
This has been really good so far, however, I would suggest that you might try to fix the mistakes in spelling and grammar. Anyway, thanks for taking the time to write this! I am absolutely hooked!
8/18/2016 c28 ILOVEREADINGALOT
So emotional, I would scream in delight if my mom wasn't down stair
Can't wait for the next chapter
by the way I'm so happy to find fanfiction stories with fowl and holly
:)
So emotional, I would scream in delight if my mom wasn't down stair
Can't wait for the next chapter
by the way I'm so happy to find fanfiction stories with fowl and holly
:)
8/10/2016 c28 Foaly's techie
YES! I did infact screamed in delight!(female techie:P) finally he said it:O! this was serious a surprising episode. in the middle i was quite scared that he didn't make it:( and holly would be sobbing all over the place:( poor little elf! but luckily Artemis manage to heal and he said the magic word! ahhh:D can't wait for the next one!
YES! I did infact screamed in delight!(female techie:P) finally he said it:O! this was serious a surprising episode. in the middle i was quite scared that he didn't make it:( and holly would be sobbing all over the place:( poor little elf! but luckily Artemis manage to heal and he said the magic word! ahhh:D can't wait for the next one!
7/13/2016 c27 fanfiction5225
I have loved your story so far and I hope that you continue and finish it. Thanks for the great read
I have loved your story so far and I hope that you continue and finish it. Thanks for the great read
7/4/2016 c1 Guest
Are you ever going to update?
Are you ever going to update?
6/29/2016 c27 
1percabethstarcoDannyandSam
You just like ended that chapter right there why? Why would you torture us like that
1percabethstarcoDannyandSamYou just like ended that chapter right there why? Why would you torture us like that
6/12/2016 c2 NAMELESS
Hey, when are you going to update? this is one of my favorite stories, i hope you will continue
Hey, when are you going to update? this is one of my favorite stories, i hope you will continue
5/24/2016 c3 Guest
Hmm, work on spelling and use actual terms, bedrock isn't I breakable irl, other than that good plot and in general story
Hmm, work on spelling and use actual terms, bedrock isn't I breakable irl, other than that good plot and in general story
5/17/2016 c27 Anonymous
Then get on with it man I am completely enthralled at the moment so get this story moving
Then get on with it man I am completely enthralled at the moment so get this story moving
5/17/2016 c25 Anonymous
OH SHIT JUST HIT THE FAN AND BLEW IT THE FUCK UP
OH SHIT JUST HIT THE FAN AND BLEW IT THE FUCK UP
5/16/2016 c14 Anonymous
Juliet has hit Artemis' thoughts right on the nail without even knowing it
Juliet has hit Artemis' thoughts right on the nail without even knowing it