
2/27/2016 c1 Fade Sevar
this was a very good fanfic there is a few problems so far only a few typos and a little to descriptive at points that are not as important to the plot of the story but it is very good and i could see this as the ninth book if he would have considered to make an epilogue book... your doing good this far im just sad i have to wait to read the next chapter
this was a very good fanfic there is a few problems so far only a few typos and a little to descriptive at points that are not as important to the plot of the story but it is very good and i could see this as the ninth book if he would have considered to make an epilogue book... your doing good this far im just sad i have to wait to read the next chapter
1/20/2016 c24 Guest
Love
Love
1/2/2016 c24 Shadow
Fantastic job, keep up the good work and out of blatant curiosity how many more chapters are you planning on writing?
Fantastic job, keep up the good work and out of blatant curiosity how many more chapters are you planning on writing?
12/31/2015 c24 starlight27sparks
Yay! Great job on this chapter I'm looking forward to the rest it! :D
Yay! Great job on this chapter I'm looking forward to the rest it! :D
12/16/2015 c1 tidus
you did a fantastic job, i really enjoyed this, it makes me think that you are the same person as the original writer of the AF novels
you did a fantastic job, i really enjoyed this, it makes me think that you are the same person as the original writer of the AF novels
12/14/2015 c18 starlight27sparks
Ok i just wanted to say i really love this story! I've been looking really hard for a good artemis fanfic and this was pretty awesome. :D I've only finished ch. 18 but i really like it keep up the good work! And i mean i guess spelling and grammar aren't always great but honestly i don't even care because the story is good and that is what i care about. Thanks for taking the time to write this and i can't wait to see how it turns out. :)
Ps. Sorry for the long comment lol
Ok i just wanted to say i really love this story! I've been looking really hard for a good artemis fanfic and this was pretty awesome. :D I've only finished ch. 18 but i really like it keep up the good work! And i mean i guess spelling and grammar aren't always great but honestly i don't even care because the story is good and that is what i care about. Thanks for taking the time to write this and i can't wait to see how it turns out. :)
Ps. Sorry for the long comment lol
12/14/2015 c23 James
Terra is fav
Terra is fav
12/13/2015 c23 James
School trip. Well looking forward to it. Really want you to go into extremely deep detail and make it as long as 23. Plz
School trip. Well looking forward to it. Really want you to go into extremely deep detail and make it as long as 23. Plz
12/13/2015 c23
2The Space Wizard Storybook
This was great, funny how she will so readily tell her friends she loves him, so Holly jumped in on a couple trying to relax, and somebody needed to go to the hospital, yikes, anyways, hope to see more from you soon, ciao!

This was great, funny how she will so readily tell her friends she loves him, so Holly jumped in on a couple trying to relax, and somebody needed to go to the hospital, yikes, anyways, hope to see more from you soon, ciao!
12/12/2015 c23 drgraves129
Another wonderful chapter uploaded. I just can't wait till Holly an Artemis come together. Good luck, please keep writing and never give up on a story.
Another wonderful chapter uploaded. I just can't wait till Holly an Artemis come together. Good luck, please keep writing and never give up on a story.