
11/30/2015 c22 Guest
This is a great story, I love it. Please update soon!
:-) (º~º ) (•_•)
This is a great story, I love it. Please update soon!
:-) (º~º ) (•_•)
10/12/2015 c21 James Stratos
Love it sir you are stellar. Envelope if there are small spelling errors. Please do I beg of you.
PS your a great rapid planner
Love it sir you are stellar. Envelope if there are small spelling errors. Please do I beg of you.
PS your a great rapid planner
10/4/2015 c22 Guest
I love the series so far but why are there no more chapters?
I love the series so far but why are there no more chapters?
9/8/2015 c21 drgraves129
Once again thank you for the update. I love where the story is going and I can't wait to see what happens next. Good luck, please keep writing and never give up on a story.
Once again thank you for the update. I love where the story is going and I can't wait to see what happens next. Good luck, please keep writing and never give up on a story.
7/31/2015 c20 MissyMattingly
Continue the story now I'm sleeping wake up please finish this I can't stand not knowing what's going to happen
Continue the story now I'm sleeping wake up please finish this I can't stand not knowing what's going to happen
7/3/2015 c20 Guest
Write more i love the story! Terra is adorable, is she a centuar too?
Write more i love the story! Terra is adorable, is she a centuar too?
7/1/2015 c20
6Zeke5000
Wow... this is pretty good. Sure, some spelling and grammar issues (not bad enough to make be wonder) here and there but this is actually good XD
I have some thoughts of what the Plan is, but I'll just keep it to myself for now. Wouldn't want to accidentally guess it correctly.
Though... i am peeking at Trouble's attitude two chapters ago... I sense a disturbance, hopefully I'm wrong.
7.10

Wow... this is pretty good. Sure, some spelling and grammar issues (not bad enough to make be wonder) here and there but this is actually good XD
I have some thoughts of what the Plan is, but I'll just keep it to myself for now. Wouldn't want to accidentally guess it correctly.
Though... i am peeking at Trouble's attitude two chapters ago... I sense a disturbance, hopefully I'm wrong.
7.10
6/29/2015 c1 Deen
I like your theme of the book so far but I was just wondering if maybe you should get an editor, because there are a lot of typos in this story, and it makes it kind of hard to read.
I like your theme of the book so far but I was just wondering if maybe you should get an editor, because there are a lot of typos in this story, and it makes it kind of hard to read.
6/29/2015 c20
2ChaosReceipt
You have to finish this story, we have not even gotten past the exposition. Gj, I hope you continue it.

You have to finish this story, we have not even gotten past the exposition. Gj, I hope you continue it.
6/26/2015 c20 drgraves129
THank you for the update I love your story. I can't wait to see how this plays out. Good luck, please keep writing and never give up on a story.
THank you for the update I love your story. I can't wait to see how this plays out. Good luck, please keep writing and never give up on a story.
6/24/2015 c19 Viv
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASR CONTINUE! I LOST YOUR STORY AND I FINALLY FOUND IT! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAASSSEEEE CONTINUE!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASR CONTINUE! I LOST YOUR STORY AND I FINALLY FOUND IT! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAASSSEEEE CONTINUE!