
8/15/2014 c4
5Man of Constant Sorrow
One thing, you address the pointy ear issue, but totally skirt around the fact that she is the size of a small child. I hate when authors dodge that issue in Hartemis stories or even worse transform her into a human/human sized body.
They are different species, love overcomes all and transcends all boundaries, that's the message of their relationship

One thing, you address the pointy ear issue, but totally skirt around the fact that she is the size of a small child. I hate when authors dodge that issue in Hartemis stories or even worse transform her into a human/human sized body.
They are different species, love overcomes all and transcends all boundaries, that's the message of their relationship
8/4/2014 c1 hollyarty
plz continue writing the chapters ... you've been away so long . plz complete the story qickly.
you right very well!
plz continue writing the chapters ... you've been away so long . plz complete the story qickly.
you right very well!
8/2/2014 c15 Guest
plz write the next chapter quickly...I am dying to read it.
plz write the next chapter quickly...I am dying to read it.
8/2/2014 c15
14HollyShortRulz
Hey Yendor, I've been away, so haven't been reading as much lately, but I just read your new chapter and I think it's awesome!
Btw, thanks for your advice!
The offer of help is always there she you need it!
Please, please keep writing!
Luv
HollyShortRulz

Hey Yendor, I've been away, so haven't been reading as much lately, but I just read your new chapter and I think it's awesome!
Btw, thanks for your advice!
The offer of help is always there she you need it!
Please, please keep writing!
Luv
HollyShortRulz
7/23/2014 c14
14HollyShortRulz
Awesome! Right up there with your usual standard, if not better, which is hard, because your standard is the best!
Love it!
Luv,
HollyShortRulz

Awesome! Right up there with your usual standard, if not better, which is hard, because your standard is the best!
Love it!
Luv,
HollyShortRulz
7/22/2014 c14 Jay
send as much out as soon as possible please. Thank you, this is good.
send as much out as soon as possible please. Thank you, this is good.
7/20/2014 c14 LLLong
I really like this series, can you please continue it, I am dying to see Artemis's plan (though I have a idea of what it is) please keep up the awesome work!
I really like this series, can you please continue it, I am dying to see Artemis's plan (though I have a idea of what it is) please keep up the awesome work!
7/7/2014 c13 HollyShortRulz
Hey Yendor, HollyShortRulz here, just wanted to say that I really like your story, and if you ever need a hand, I'd be willing to help. You have a really great gift with plots, and I'd love to see it continue into the future!
Luv,
HollyShortRulz
Hey Yendor, HollyShortRulz here, just wanted to say that I really like your story, and if you ever need a hand, I'd be willing to help. You have a really great gift with plots, and I'd love to see it continue into the future!
Luv,
HollyShortRulz
6/17/2014 c3 nate dogg
Awesome. You should become a full Time author!
Awesome. You should become a full Time author!
6/14/2014 c13
7Nightshade1712
Butler knows Artemis has fallen for Holly, I think he knew even before Artemis did, any way great job on the chapter can't wait to see the next one, I have noticed that some more of word that need capitalize have been, not quite all of them but more that is good to see, keep up the good work.

Butler knows Artemis has fallen for Holly, I think he knew even before Artemis did, any way great job on the chapter can't wait to see the next one, I have noticed that some more of word that need capitalize have been, not quite all of them but more that is good to see, keep up the good work.
6/7/2014 c12 Nightshade1712
Hey if you need a writing program with spell check there is a free one on the Fanfiction home page that works well, I use it all the time. any way great job on the chapter, other then the spelling mistakes this is a very good story, I just wish the chapters where a little bit longer, any way keep up the good work with the story, and dont let any one get you down, oh and watch out of an anonymous review Kreepers Grim, he or she likes to put people down, I had him review one of my stories, he or she is just a jerk.
Hey if you need a writing program with spell check there is a free one on the Fanfiction home page that works well, I use it all the time. any way great job on the chapter, other then the spelling mistakes this is a very good story, I just wish the chapters where a little bit longer, any way keep up the good work with the story, and dont let any one get you down, oh and watch out of an anonymous review Kreepers Grim, he or she likes to put people down, I had him review one of my stories, he or she is just a jerk.