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11/25/2013 c4 
59APhoenixRising
First of all, I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to review this! I really do appreciate you writing this for me.
Now, onto the actual story!
I really liked this, it was an in depth exploration of a relatively minor character. And you know how much I like my minor characters!
I like the little side of Fleur in here as well, it's exactly how I would imagine her to react and I kind of feel sorry for Bill, knowing that he sees this.
I really love how you've included more than one opinion about him, if you get what I mean? How we get views from Fleur, Molly, Ginny and Bill himself.
And the last line was /so/ good! Very sad, but so true and it sums up what this drabble was all about, really.
Thank you!
59APhoenixRisingFirst of all, I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to review this! I really do appreciate you writing this for me.
Now, onto the actual story!
I really liked this, it was an in depth exploration of a relatively minor character. And you know how much I like my minor characters!
I like the little side of Fleur in here as well, it's exactly how I would imagine her to react and I kind of feel sorry for Bill, knowing that he sees this.
I really love how you've included more than one opinion about him, if you get what I mean? How we get views from Fleur, Molly, Ginny and Bill himself.
And the last line was /so/ good! Very sad, but so true and it sums up what this drabble was all about, really.
Thank you!
11/21/2013 c4 14in-dreams-maybe
This was wonderful! Bill really hasn't got it easy for him, eh? I love how you portray his family as being supportive of him, from Fleur's dedication to him to Remus and ugh. The feels. This both warmed and broke my heart and I thought the last line was perfect [The war has left him scarred on the outside, but really, who can say the war hasn't scarred them, visibly or not?] An amazing end to a even more fabulous story.
14in-dreams-maybeThis was wonderful! Bill really hasn't got it easy for him, eh? I love how you portray his family as being supportive of him, from Fleur's dedication to him to Remus and ugh. The feels. This both warmed and broke my heart and I thought the last line was perfect [The war has left him scarred on the outside, but really, who can say the war hasn't scarred them, visibly or not?] An amazing end to a even more fabulous story.
9/28/2013 c11 34Montley
Aww!
This was such a sweet story, and I just loved how Ron was there for her, even comforting her when it came to Fred.
I loved the whole sickle for your thoughts aspect in this, it was very cute!
I liked the last few sentences most of all, it said so much about their relationship, and I loved how Ron would 'take them all, good and bad, and he wouldn't waste a second', that was a marvelous line! And the love he has for her really radiates off of this story!
All in all, this was a really sweet story and I really enjoyed it!
Wonderful work!
34MontleyAww!
This was such a sweet story, and I just loved how Ron was there for her, even comforting her when it came to Fred.
I loved the whole sickle for your thoughts aspect in this, it was very cute!
I liked the last few sentences most of all, it said so much about their relationship, and I loved how Ron would 'take them all, good and bad, and he wouldn't waste a second', that was a marvelous line! And the love he has for her really radiates off of this story!
All in all, this was a really sweet story and I really enjoyed it!
Wonderful work!
9/27/2013 c11 48bonniebonbon
"I reckon we can all be a bit philosophical sometimes, and we don't all have to be brainiacs like Hermione Granger." Haha, this was great. Very Ron-ish, too, saying 'reckon' and calling Hermione a 'braniac'. Not to mention calling Hermione her full name.
The phrase, "Sickle for your thoughts?" was a creative play on "Penny for your thoughts?" :) Great way to start the story in my opinion.
Hermione was in-character, too, laughing uneasily and having trouble organizing her thoughts. And her missing her parents is completely understandable.
Overall, I think this was great. Nice job! :)
48bonniebonbon"I reckon we can all be a bit philosophical sometimes, and we don't all have to be brainiacs like Hermione Granger." Haha, this was great. Very Ron-ish, too, saying 'reckon' and calling Hermione a 'braniac'. Not to mention calling Hermione her full name.
The phrase, "Sickle for your thoughts?" was a creative play on "Penny for your thoughts?" :) Great way to start the story in my opinion.
Hermione was in-character, too, laughing uneasily and having trouble organizing her thoughts. And her missing her parents is completely understandable.
Overall, I think this was great. Nice job! :)
9/27/2013 c11 19xThe Painted Lady
That was cute. I love Romione. I do wish you had taken a slightly different approach to the story, giving it a little bit of plot as opposed to dialogue and consoling - although it was cute, it didn't stand out to me, and there are a lot of fics like this out there. I know it's the thing some people like and you may have just wanted simplicity, which I understand completely, but um, yeah...
I really like this line: [I feel silly complaining about anything at all, when what I'm going through is nothing compared to what you and your family have lost. I mean Fred, Fred was important to me too, but I didn't live with him, grow up with him, or know him in the ways you do, and I can't miss him in the same way either."] - I feel that explains my feelings toward some things, and so I could relate to Hermione there.
It was lovely to see the bond Ron and Hermione had developed at the end of the war. I really like how you brought that to light. And I also liked the mentioning of good days and bad days, because that's what life is really - you just need to learn to embrace the good at every chance you get. I also loved this line: ["The trick is to enjoy life. Don't waste away your days wishing for better ones ahead," said Ron sagely.] - A really nice touch of philosophy there. ;)
Overall, I enjoyed it. Well done.
19xThe Painted LadyThat was cute. I love Romione. I do wish you had taken a slightly different approach to the story, giving it a little bit of plot as opposed to dialogue and consoling - although it was cute, it didn't stand out to me, and there are a lot of fics like this out there. I know it's the thing some people like and you may have just wanted simplicity, which I understand completely, but um, yeah...
I really like this line: [I feel silly complaining about anything at all, when what I'm going through is nothing compared to what you and your family have lost. I mean Fred, Fred was important to me too, but I didn't live with him, grow up with him, or know him in the ways you do, and I can't miss him in the same way either."] - I feel that explains my feelings toward some things, and so I could relate to Hermione there.
It was lovely to see the bond Ron and Hermione had developed at the end of the war. I really like how you brought that to light. And I also liked the mentioning of good days and bad days, because that's what life is really - you just need to learn to embrace the good at every chance you get. I also loved this line: ["The trick is to enjoy life. Don't waste away your days wishing for better ones ahead," said Ron sagely.] - A really nice touch of philosophy there. ;)
Overall, I enjoyed it. Well done.
9/25/2013 c11 130Izzyaro
This was really good. You characterised both Ron and Hermione beautifully; I like that Ron still has insecurities about not being good enough when it comes to being with Hermione, and Hermione drawing a wand on him when he first approached was a very realistic reaction considering everything they've been through. Hermione's concerns were very well done, and I loved how Ron was able to eventually calm her down. Nice job with this, well done.
130IzzyaroThis was really good. You characterised both Ron and Hermione beautifully; I like that Ron still has insecurities about not being good enough when it comes to being with Hermione, and Hermione drawing a wand on him when he first approached was a very realistic reaction considering everything they've been through. Hermione's concerns were very well done, and I loved how Ron was able to eventually calm her down. Nice job with this, well done.
9/24/2013 c11 239Mein Liebling
I love how Ron kept on adding more sickles "One sickle? Two? How about four?" I found that funny and it helped lightened the mood for this. I really adored how cute Ron and Hermione were in this, how kind and how they poked fun at one another. The flow and SPaG was perfect for this and I just really enjoyed reading it.
239Mein LieblingI love how Ron kept on adding more sickles "One sickle? Two? How about four?" I found that funny and it helped lightened the mood for this. I really adored how cute Ron and Hermione were in this, how kind and how they poked fun at one another. The flow and SPaG was perfect for this and I just really enjoyed reading it.
9/21/2013 c11 131autumn midnights
I liked this. I'm not usually one to read canon romance pairs, because I find them a little overdone, but I think you did a good job with this. I really enjoyed the fact that basically the whole fic was about how things weren't perfect after the war. I think that there was a lot of healing that had to be done, and I like that you touched on that issue. A detail that I loved: Hermione being jumpy and practically attacking Ron when he startled her. In my opinion, that's incredibly realistic for somebody who had just been through a war; I think most of the students would respond like that, for a little while at least. SPaG was excellent; just a small typo (it's 'dessert' to refer to something sweet, not 'desert'). Nice story.
131autumn midnightsI liked this. I'm not usually one to read canon romance pairs, because I find them a little overdone, but I think you did a good job with this. I really enjoyed the fact that basically the whole fic was about how things weren't perfect after the war. I think that there was a lot of healing that had to be done, and I like that you touched on that issue. A detail that I loved: Hermione being jumpy and practically attacking Ron when he startled her. In my opinion, that's incredibly realistic for somebody who had just been through a war; I think most of the students would respond like that, for a little while at least. SPaG was excellent; just a small typo (it's 'dessert' to refer to something sweet, not 'desert'). Nice story.