for Feelings For My Hanyou8/16/2013 c1 
7Warrior's Way
hey it suck that you have to rewrite your story but keep going we love your story want to know how it end i havent givin up on the story i keep rereading what i can and hope for more. thanks for your time.
7Warrior's Wayhey it suck that you have to rewrite your story but keep going we love your story want to know how it end i havent givin up on the story i keep rereading what i can and hope for more. thanks for your time.
8/13/2013 c1 wolf2ong
DUDE! post something we all are dieing slowly from the wait?! Dont let me die post something mwahaha :L
DUDE! post something we all are dieing slowly from the wait?! Dont let me die post something mwahaha :L
6/17/2013 c1 2yupella
Please hurry and make the next chapter! I am so shocked to hear that you will not be updating the old version! I really like it! Please update old version i want to know what will happen with Inuyasha and Kagome! U R AWESOME! xx
2yupellaPlease hurry and make the next chapter! I am so shocked to hear that you will not be updating the old version! I really like it! Please update old version i want to know what will happen with Inuyasha and Kagome! U R AWESOME! xx
6/15/2013 c1 Awsomeness7
Huh, I would mention the length but seeing as I'm currently under the impression that you did this in only one day, CONGRATULATIONS! Seriously, that was really fast, you only decided that you wanted a remake like yesterday or something. But back to the actual story, you might want to put the pov changes in bold, just in case and Kagome happens to sound kind of ghetto. I like the sarcasm in her pov but it's a bit much and makes the story too unprofessional. Despite it feeling more natural to write in such a casual and familiar way, this should still be a somewhat professional story. I saw a few mistakes with capitalization and other things, too lazy to mention, I figure you just did this at a late hour and didn't get a chance to look over it. A beta is definitely recommended, unfortunately I can't be that beta. Lastly I find it interesting that you kept Inuyasha as a hanyou despite the title. Strange, but interesting...
Huh, I would mention the length but seeing as I'm currently under the impression that you did this in only one day, CONGRATULATIONS! Seriously, that was really fast, you only decided that you wanted a remake like yesterday or something. But back to the actual story, you might want to put the pov changes in bold, just in case and Kagome happens to sound kind of ghetto. I like the sarcasm in her pov but it's a bit much and makes the story too unprofessional. Despite it feeling more natural to write in such a casual and familiar way, this should still be a somewhat professional story. I saw a few mistakes with capitalization and other things, too lazy to mention, I figure you just did this at a late hour and didn't get a chance to look over it. A beta is definitely recommended, unfortunately I can't be that beta. Lastly I find it interesting that you kept Inuyasha as a hanyou despite the title. Strange, but interesting...
6/15/2013 c1 2manga-animelove
Weee Awesome start... :D
Miroku always make me laugh... and Sango trying to deny that she likes Miroku... :3
I'm really happy you are back again... :D and I'm looking forward to the next chapter... :)
2manga-animeloveWeee Awesome start... :D
Miroku always make me laugh... and Sango trying to deny that she likes Miroku... :3
I'm really happy you are back again... :D and I'm looking forward to the next chapter... :)
6/15/2013 c1 InuyashaXKagome
I like it :D Please continue :)
I like it :D Please continue :)
6/15/2013 c1 InuKagTrueLove
Good start! We're always here with you so don't
be looking forword for more chapters :)
Good start! We're always here with you so don't
be looking forword for more chapters :)