for Count the Stars4/20/2017 c5 gazal.blirf
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How you where writing I come to the last page and suddenly spams no is shit... what happened?
It is ?
How you where writing I come to the last page and suddenly spams no is shit... what happened?
11/20/2015 c5 
7scarletnight72
I'm guessing you got hacked? Regardless, I love this story. You've made Lovino abrasive without making him unlikable.
7scarletnight72I'm guessing you got hacked? Regardless, I love this story. You've made Lovino abrasive without making him unlikable.
11/15/2015 c5 Guest
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11/15/2015 c5 Lovi
I am one angry God.
Too many humans writing dirty stories about me in all of my various forms.
I am in every anime, book, and movie.
Fictional characters are based on real Gods.
You humans have zero respect for us!
Revenge!
I am one angry God.
Too many humans writing dirty stories about me in all of my various forms.
I am in every anime, book, and movie.
Fictional characters are based on real Gods.
You humans have zero respect for us!
Revenge!
11/15/2015 c5 Guest
Is it a joke ?
Is it a joke ?
1/12/2014 c4 1SeriPhe08
This story had serious potential in my personal opinion... I look forward to the next chapter whenever it finally arrives... the story line flows and I am making guesses as to what will happen, but I really really want to find out what happens next.
Please update soon...
SeriPhe
1SeriPhe08This story had serious potential in my personal opinion... I look forward to the next chapter whenever it finally arrives... the story line flows and I am making guesses as to what will happen, but I really really want to find out what happens next.
Please update soon...
SeriPhe
7/25/2013 c4 Anon
I cant wait to read more, you have a knack for crafting interesting plots. 3
I cant wait to read more, you have a knack for crafting interesting plots. 3
7/21/2013 c4 13Famy62
Okay, this is an amazing story. Multiple reasons. First, you have a plot with much promise that has the effects of something that would occur in real life, with hints of something else hidden within the seemingly innocent (maybe mundane is a better word) story. The characters are great; its not entirely cannon like, but you capture Lovino's older brother nature so well, it makes me want to squeal. And on top of that, you have little things in here that make it amusing, some of which I can relate to, such as 'never having a nosebleed'. Random thing that is completely irrelevant but amusing none the less. Also the whole thing with being in a town with weird people. I can easily understand that; my town (also very small) consists of hippies and rednecks. But, I digress. You really catch the age in the characters, making it believable that Lovino is a preteen, dealing with raging hormones. Also, the fact that you have Lovino and Antonio starting off as childhood friends is another plus; I have not seen that many stories with a start on them being childhood friends. Keep up the amazing work!
13Famy62Okay, this is an amazing story. Multiple reasons. First, you have a plot with much promise that has the effects of something that would occur in real life, with hints of something else hidden within the seemingly innocent (maybe mundane is a better word) story. The characters are great; its not entirely cannon like, but you capture Lovino's older brother nature so well, it makes me want to squeal. And on top of that, you have little things in here that make it amusing, some of which I can relate to, such as 'never having a nosebleed'. Random thing that is completely irrelevant but amusing none the less. Also the whole thing with being in a town with weird people. I can easily understand that; my town (also very small) consists of hippies and rednecks. But, I digress. You really catch the age in the characters, making it believable that Lovino is a preteen, dealing with raging hormones. Also, the fact that you have Lovino and Antonio starting off as childhood friends is another plus; I have not seen that many stories with a start on them being childhood friends. Keep up the amazing work!
7/19/2013 c4 evitaerc eman
I wonder who the woman is...whoever she is though she definitely doesn't sound good (who would lie to such an extent?)
Anyway, interesting chapter. I think jumping straight to two weeks later was a little rushed though. Maybe insert something like how the progress went/is going, if you're planning another large skip in time like that. :) However I did like how you went into detail Lovino's thought processes like why he had to lie to Antonio and his concern for Feli. Hope to see another chapter soon! This story is great, and I'm super curious as to what's going to happen next.
I wonder who the woman is...whoever she is though she definitely doesn't sound good (who would lie to such an extent?)
Anyway, interesting chapter. I think jumping straight to two weeks later was a little rushed though. Maybe insert something like how the progress went/is going, if you're planning another large skip in time like that. :) However I did like how you went into detail Lovino's thought processes like why he had to lie to Antonio and his concern for Feli. Hope to see another chapter soon! This story is great, and I'm super curious as to what's going to happen next.
7/19/2013 c4 102degreesabovefreezing
I really love this story. I'm bad at reviews so I can't be of much help. To get your story more popular, just keep updating and with reliable speed. Try posting your story on other sites our just a long summary and a link. I love the characters and dialog, your doing a really great job.
102degreesabovefreezingI really love this story. I'm bad at reviews so I can't be of much help. To get your story more popular, just keep updating and with reliable speed. Try posting your story on other sites our just a long summary and a link. I love the characters and dialog, your doing a really great job.
7/19/2013 c4 2Burlesque Romantique
Aww, I feel honored that you look forward to my reviews! I feel that stories that are really well-written with great plots deserve feedback and praise.
Anyway, this was another lovely chapter. The new developments are interesting, especially the boy in the stall, how Feliciano is acting, and this new girlfriend. Hmm, very curious to see what may happen. I'm sure that woman doesn't have good intentions since she's lying quite a bit...but I can't really attempt to guess what's going to happen.
You've done a great job at keeping up the suspense, and it's not easy to figure out just what could happen. And having Lovino struggle internally about Antonio and any possible attraction for him is cute and hilarious. I'm very excited for the next chapter, I hope you'll be able to update soon.
2Burlesque RomantiqueAww, I feel honored that you look forward to my reviews! I feel that stories that are really well-written with great plots deserve feedback and praise.
Anyway, this was another lovely chapter. The new developments are interesting, especially the boy in the stall, how Feliciano is acting, and this new girlfriend. Hmm, very curious to see what may happen. I'm sure that woman doesn't have good intentions since she's lying quite a bit...but I can't really attempt to guess what's going to happen.
You've done a great job at keeping up the suspense, and it's not easy to figure out just what could happen. And having Lovino struggle internally about Antonio and any possible attraction for him is cute and hilarious. I'm very excited for the next chapter, I hope you'll be able to update soon.