for My son
14/5/2014 c2 Commander Bear
I liked the chapter but don't threaten readers that you'll delete the story. It makes you sound rude and stops people from wanting to keep reading
I liked the chapter but don't threaten readers that you'll delete the story. It makes you sound rude and stops people from wanting to keep reading
4/5/2014 c1 Commander Bear
I have looked EVERYWHERE for a story with mordred as arthur and morgana's son. Finally someone wrote one!
I just have a quick thing, make a new paragraph when someone new talks, you missed a couple
I have looked EVERYWHERE for a story with mordred as arthur and morgana's son. Finally someone wrote one!
I just have a quick thing, make a new paragraph when someone new talks, you missed a couple
6/24/2013 c4 Mordred Mckeever
Please continue with this the plot is so good and the writing is fantastics all the characters are portrayed perfectly! Write more of this! Xxx
Please continue with this the plot is so good and the writing is fantastics all the characters are portrayed perfectly! Write more of this! Xxx
6/19/2013 c2 Guest
You may as well delete it now. You just turned me off from even reading the second chapter even though your writing is fantastic. Goodbye.
You may as well delete it now. You just turned me off from even reading the second chapter even though your writing is fantastic. Goodbye.
6/19/2013 c1 Guest
Ooh nice twist to the story.
Ooh nice twist to the story.
6/18/2013 c2 Yosef coleman
Please continue the story. Very good. Like the storyline and could you please have a post murder arthur/morgana confrontation were he asks her why she did this.
Please continue the story. Very good. Like the storyline and could you please have a post murder arthur/morgana confrontation were he asks her why she did this.