for The Rigel Black Chronicles6/10/2017 c1 rigel4evah
This was beautiful. honestly, if you don't update soon i may just have a coronary. brilliant. utterly so.
This was beautiful. honestly, if you don't update soon i may just have a coronary. brilliant. utterly so.
4/10/2017 c5 sad.run
I really really really love this fanfic
I've been waiting for Rigel black to update
and this was awesome really loved it
made me laugh at several parts
reallllly amazing
I loved how the chapters were looooong, made me really happy
thank you
hope u update soon
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I really really really love this fanfic
I've been waiting for Rigel black to update
and this was awesome really loved it
made me laugh at several parts
reallllly amazing
I loved how the chapters were looooong, made me really happy
thank you
hope u update soon
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4/8/2017 c4 
1Lady Rebell-K
And, following my previous comment in your chapter 5, let's not forget that the title of the fourth book is The Futile Facade... So there is clearly someone who will find out a big part of the deal and I am ready to wager that Snape will be the one, if the story goes on these lines... Cause Archie and Harry, who are both supposed to like potions like it's the air they breath could not be possibly in the same place at the same time with Snape (let's say in the Lab One for their lesson on Free brewing that they will clearly attempt at the same time if Archie comes to Hogwarts for the Triwizard T.) without Snape figuring at lot of things out. And maybe this is what is going to do the difference in the end, cause he will definitely not annonce to the world the big mess Harry is in. He wouldn't condemn his most brilliant student, even if she's the daughter of James. And he couldn't tell Riddle, cause he is a halfblood like her, and he would be obviously impressed by what she has achieved to study with him. So this is my bet for this book.
1Lady Rebell-KAnd, following my previous comment in your chapter 5, let's not forget that the title of the fourth book is The Futile Facade... So there is clearly someone who will find out a big part of the deal and I am ready to wager that Snape will be the one, if the story goes on these lines... Cause Archie and Harry, who are both supposed to like potions like it's the air they breath could not be possibly in the same place at the same time with Snape (let's say in the Lab One for their lesson on Free brewing that they will clearly attempt at the same time if Archie comes to Hogwarts for the Triwizard T.) without Snape figuring at lot of things out. And maybe this is what is going to do the difference in the end, cause he will definitely not annonce to the world the big mess Harry is in. He wouldn't condemn his most brilliant student, even if she's the daughter of James. And he couldn't tell Riddle, cause he is a halfblood like her, and he would be obviously impressed by what she has achieved to study with him. So this is my bet for this book.
4/8/2017 c5 Lady Rebell-K
Wow! This is very impressive... I guess now it's somehow a little hard for me to imagine that the true story of Violet could not go on that path. Your writing is really beautiful and interesting and I cannot be more exited to see your next chapter! The only little flat that may need improvement, if you allow me to say so, is that the story is going rather fast! In my eagerness of seeing the next chapter of Violet, I tried to figure out some of the things that might happen next, cause it helps me to calm down when my patience has a rough time... And I would like to share some of those with you... It's like a time line of the fourth year and maybe the big lines of what could follow in the 5th! Lets begin!
1. Harry's birthday
2. Archie's return
3. Luncheon with Narcissa
4. The Quidditch World Cup
5. Harry/Snape correspondance
6. Harry/Leo - Alley - Dark person who wants to recrute Harry?
7. Polyjuice potion/glamours (They never talked about Harry being under glamours yet. Will she continue with it or brew another PJ potion?)
8. Caelum return from his apprenticeship in Chile and see Harry
9. Return to Hogwarts
10. New DADA professor (Moody) use the unforgivable curses and Rigel don't react well? (inspiration from your story, which was quite brilliant)
11. The Triwizard tournament
12. Harriet Potter is chosen
13. Archie comes to Hogwarts
14. Harry and Archie have books for communication like the Twins
15. Snape meet both of them Together in a potion class - Everything is messed up?
16. Archie as Harry meets with Rigel's friends and Draco is jealous...
17. Rigel sleeps with a light on but Draco suggest to use his Light Star but Rigel doesn't have it?
18. Harry trains Archie for the duelling
19. Harry & Archie play a Quidditch game together and everybody is like what? (Best than Weasley Twins)
20. Somebody tries to kill Harry in the Tournament
21. James is furious, cause Harry is hurt somehow and lily is there too so there must be a confrontation with Snape at some point. (Lily or Snape use their Patronus to protect Harry? - Revelation)
22. The Yule Ball : Harry&Archie dance together (Leo decide to go because of the invitation of his father?) Lily and Snape dance together? Nah too soon!
23. Caelum comes to the Ball?
24. Riddle tries to corner Harry and Archie for the marriage?
25. Winter Break : Catching up with the Alleys (Harry gives potions classes and brew for Krait)
26. Classes go on and on at Hogwarts... Harry&Archie learn Free Brewing (more fucked up with Snape)
27. Continuation Occlumensy - Harry/Jewel
28. 2e task Tournament ... more shits?
29. People demands a duel between Archie and Harry - Archie don't fight like Rigel!
30. 3e task ... more shits?
31. End of the 4th year - Summer
32. Still more shits from the dark dude of the Alleys...?
33. Harry invite Remus to another tournament for his birthday...
34. Relationship furthering between Rispah and Remus ?
35. Messing up between Sirius-Remus because of Regulus and the stupid mariage thing for the House Black
Tome 5
* Harry turns 17 (contract wedding is non valid anymore)
* Umbridge ! (Veritaeserum)
* Machinations Riddle with his stupid wedding law
* Harry is forced to marry someone or she will be married with some stupid guy?
**(Just wondering, but Snape's a Halfblood... the law is applicable to him too I guess! Wack x 10000)**
So that's it for the moment... That's all I can think of! Thanks again for your story!
Wow! This is very impressive... I guess now it's somehow a little hard for me to imagine that the true story of Violet could not go on that path. Your writing is really beautiful and interesting and I cannot be more exited to see your next chapter! The only little flat that may need improvement, if you allow me to say so, is that the story is going rather fast! In my eagerness of seeing the next chapter of Violet, I tried to figure out some of the things that might happen next, cause it helps me to calm down when my patience has a rough time... And I would like to share some of those with you... It's like a time line of the fourth year and maybe the big lines of what could follow in the 5th! Lets begin!
1. Harry's birthday
2. Archie's return
3. Luncheon with Narcissa
4. The Quidditch World Cup
5. Harry/Snape correspondance
6. Harry/Leo - Alley - Dark person who wants to recrute Harry?
7. Polyjuice potion/glamours (They never talked about Harry being under glamours yet. Will she continue with it or brew another PJ potion?)
8. Caelum return from his apprenticeship in Chile and see Harry
9. Return to Hogwarts
10. New DADA professor (Moody) use the unforgivable curses and Rigel don't react well? (inspiration from your story, which was quite brilliant)
11. The Triwizard tournament
12. Harriet Potter is chosen
13. Archie comes to Hogwarts
14. Harry and Archie have books for communication like the Twins
15. Snape meet both of them Together in a potion class - Everything is messed up?
16. Archie as Harry meets with Rigel's friends and Draco is jealous...
17. Rigel sleeps with a light on but Draco suggest to use his Light Star but Rigel doesn't have it?
18. Harry trains Archie for the duelling
19. Harry & Archie play a Quidditch game together and everybody is like what? (Best than Weasley Twins)
20. Somebody tries to kill Harry in the Tournament
21. James is furious, cause Harry is hurt somehow and lily is there too so there must be a confrontation with Snape at some point. (Lily or Snape use their Patronus to protect Harry? - Revelation)
22. The Yule Ball : Harry&Archie dance together (Leo decide to go because of the invitation of his father?) Lily and Snape dance together? Nah too soon!
23. Caelum comes to the Ball?
24. Riddle tries to corner Harry and Archie for the marriage?
25. Winter Break : Catching up with the Alleys (Harry gives potions classes and brew for Krait)
26. Classes go on and on at Hogwarts... Harry&Archie learn Free Brewing (more fucked up with Snape)
27. Continuation Occlumensy - Harry/Jewel
28. 2e task Tournament ... more shits?
29. People demands a duel between Archie and Harry - Archie don't fight like Rigel!
30. 3e task ... more shits?
31. End of the 4th year - Summer
32. Still more shits from the dark dude of the Alleys...?
33. Harry invite Remus to another tournament for his birthday...
34. Relationship furthering between Rispah and Remus ?
35. Messing up between Sirius-Remus because of Regulus and the stupid mariage thing for the House Black
Tome 5
* Harry turns 17 (contract wedding is non valid anymore)
* Umbridge ! (Veritaeserum)
* Machinations Riddle with his stupid wedding law
* Harry is forced to marry someone or she will be married with some stupid guy?
**(Just wondering, but Snape's a Halfblood... the law is applicable to him too I guess! Wack x 10000)**
So that's it for the moment... That's all I can think of! Thanks again for your story!
2/20/2017 c2 PLEASE
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE
1/10/2017 c5 guest
slowly waiting for a new update and slowly going insane - been checking this page thrice everyday :'( but thank you for writing such fantastic fan fiction of a fan fiction-it's truly appreciated! Please please please update soon, or if possible, a little note hazarding when you might update would be amazing! have a lovely week ahead! xoxo
slowly waiting for a new update and slowly going insane - been checking this page thrice everyday :'( but thank you for writing such fantastic fan fiction of a fan fiction-it's truly appreciated! Please please please update soon, or if possible, a little note hazarding when you might update would be amazing! have a lovely week ahead! xoxo
1/6/2017 c5 12Balthanon
I'm not sure how well the Sphinx's answer actually fits if Voldemort was the enemy (assuming the answers are preternaturally correct)- with the description given this obviously was aimed at Harry/Rigel. Overall, an enjoyable ending though and I enjoyed Aldon's perspective.
12BalthanonI'm not sure how well the Sphinx's answer actually fits if Voldemort was the enemy (assuming the answers are preternaturally correct)- with the description given this obviously was aimed at Harry/Rigel. Overall, an enjoyable ending though and I enjoyed Aldon's perspective.
1/6/2017 c4 Balthanon
This is quite well done. You've matched the tone of Draco in particular very well. A couple of the interactions between Harry and Rigel seemed a little off (I couldn't remember Violet using 'cuz', for instance, though that might be a poor memory), but overall I definitely enjoyed it. It's also an interesting take on what could happen during the fourth book and the cliffhanger at the end definitely whet my appetite for the next chapter.
This is quite well done. You've matched the tone of Draco in particular very well. A couple of the interactions between Harry and Rigel seemed a little off (I couldn't remember Violet using 'cuz', for instance, though that might be a poor memory), but overall I definitely enjoyed it. It's also an interesting take on what could happen during the fourth book and the cliffhanger at the end definitely whet my appetite for the next chapter.
1/1/2017 c5 HUGE FAN
Dear Elelith,
I literally squealed when I read all your previews of the latest chapter of Rigel Black Chronicles on tumblr and on fan pages-I'm so so so looking forward to it! Your fiction gives me life, and sustains all I could ever hope for in the world of Rigel Black/Harriett Potter! Ahh looking forward to the Caelum/Albright showdown hahaha (Rosier would be much loved too!) Happy New Year! Just wanted you to know that many people out there are eagerly waiting your new instalments :)! Thank you!
Dear Elelith,
I literally squealed when I read all your previews of the latest chapter of Rigel Black Chronicles on tumblr and on fan pages-I'm so so so looking forward to it! Your fiction gives me life, and sustains all I could ever hope for in the world of Rigel Black/Harriett Potter! Ahh looking forward to the Caelum/Albright showdown hahaha (Rosier would be much loved too!) Happy New Year! Just wanted you to know that many people out there are eagerly waiting your new instalments :)! Thank you!
12/26/2016 c5 1tremeex
Ahhh I'm so interested to know if Aldon's figured it out.
I love love the obsession around "Harry and Rigel".
Wowow this is all i want in a fanfic of a fanfic.
Thank you so much for writing.
1tremeexAhhh I'm so interested to know if Aldon's figured it out.
I love love the obsession around "Harry and Rigel".
Wowow this is all i want in a fanfic of a fanfic.
Thank you so much for writing.
12/21/2016 c5 krumulent
also, im really looking forward to whatever direction you wamt this to take because it really is entertaining to read
also, im really looking forward to whatever direction you wamt this to take because it really is entertaining to read
12/21/2016 c5 krumulent
thank you thank you thank youuuu i love your work and totally needed this to tide me over during the delayed chappie
thank you thank you thank youuuu i love your work and totally needed this to tide me over during the delayed chappie
12/13/2016 c5 3yesimsleepingcurrently
Good Lord im so glad i read this im so glad you wrote this. Its amazing! Its probably one of my favoites that ive found. :) i hope your write more.
3yesimsleepingcurrentlyGood Lord im so glad i read this im so glad you wrote this. Its amazing! Its probably one of my favoites that ive found. :) i hope your write more.
12/10/2016 c4 Ninqui
I love your story. It's helping so much with the waiting for Violet's update. I read this story a wile ago and now I'm rereading it again. I noticed one small thing. In chapter four Draco is suprised that Harry recognised the alchemy Albright was using. He thought that alchemy teaching are a ''rare and coveted thing, not taught at every second tier school''. In Violet's stories it's actually mentioned that they have an Alchemy tract at AIM. I think Hermione was even considering studying it (she was interested in alchemy and healing, but decided on healing as it is something her parents would be able to understand and appreciate better). So it wouldn't be really so strange for Harry to recognise alchemy. I got the impression that it's more popular at AIM than in Hogwarts, because at Hogwarts we know only about Harry and Albright studying it and AIM has the whole tract dedicated to it.
I love your story. It's helping so much with the waiting for Violet's update. I read this story a wile ago and now I'm rereading it again. I noticed one small thing. In chapter four Draco is suprised that Harry recognised the alchemy Albright was using. He thought that alchemy teaching are a ''rare and coveted thing, not taught at every second tier school''. In Violet's stories it's actually mentioned that they have an Alchemy tract at AIM. I think Hermione was even considering studying it (she was interested in alchemy and healing, but decided on healing as it is something her parents would be able to understand and appreciate better). So it wouldn't be really so strange for Harry to recognise alchemy. I got the impression that it's more popular at AIM than in Hogwarts, because at Hogwarts we know only about Harry and Albright studying it and AIM has the whole tract dedicated to it.
11/28/2016 c5 FanofRigel
Liked this! Yay for getting my mind half off of waiting for the next chapter of FF. Very enjoyable read.
Liked this! Yay for getting my mind half off of waiting for the next chapter of FF. Very enjoyable read.