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7/7/2016 c2 Nelson
Well, it seems like the action is about to start. One question though, isn't Jecht supposed be with Chaos instead of Tidus? Or are you going to deviate from game canon with that as well? Other than that, and a bit of confusion since I don't remember Yu Yu Hakusho (or its characters) all that much, I look forward to another chapter.
Well, it seems like the action is about to start. One question though, isn't Jecht supposed be with Chaos instead of Tidus? Or are you going to deviate from game canon with that as well? Other than that, and a bit of confusion since I don't remember Yu Yu Hakusho (or its characters) all that much, I look forward to another chapter.
112/24/2013 c1 Apocalyptica-sama
I recommend longer chapters and add a bit of comedy. That always helps. Try not to focus on every single character...make a small group(4-6) and focus on them for a bit. And have them interact with different small groups.
Don't go into FULL detail with fights and try to add some slice-of-life kind of chapters...it gets pretty stale when its just pure plot and action.
Good luck :3
I recommend longer chapters and add a bit of comedy. That always helps. Try not to focus on every single character...make a small group(4-6) and focus on them for a bit. And have them interact with different small groups.
Don't go into FULL detail with fights and try to add some slice-of-life kind of chapters...it gets pretty stale when its just pure plot and action.
Good luck :3
11/27/2013 c1 ILoveReadingFanFics
Its an interesting story idea and start but im a little bummed that the chapter was so short. Keep it up im sure if people tried this story then they would like it too. :)
Its an interesting story idea and start but im a little bummed that the chapter was so short. Keep it up im sure if people tried this story then they would like it too. :)
7/28/2013 c1 Guest
If you could, can you continue this story? I'd like to see where it goes.
If you could, can you continue this story? I'd like to see where it goes.
6/19/2013 c1 3144.imy
Hey... It was nice.. Especially the naration...
But i wanted to ask u that wat abt the first fanfic of urs...? Please dont stop that continue that as well as this...
Pleaaseee... Good luck..
Hey... It was nice.. Especially the naration...
But i wanted to ask u that wat abt the first fanfic of urs...? Please dont stop that continue that as well as this...
Pleaaseee... Good luck..