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5/26/2014 c18 cool cat
lucy is sooooooooooo awesome and cool
can u pls. write more chaps... plssssssssss
5/11/2014 c18 Guest
I love this story! Plz keep writing!
5/9/2014 c18 Lola
Great! Amazing! Awesome!
4/20/2014 c18 PonyTheFluff
OMG this could be the best story I have ever read! Pls pls pls update it's alr April!
4/19/2014 c18 Alert1
Alert 1 approves of this fanfic
4/17/2014 c18 2Aotsuki Rieko
Hi there, just dropping a review.
I like this story's plot and all but I think that Lucy and her friends have too much powers, making it sound like an exaggeration.
Secondly, the sentences are too short and not detailed, making the entire story seem to brief. The grammatical errors and horrible paragraph spacing are abundant.
The characters are awesome as well. However, their romance with the characters from Sabertooth is yet again, brief and fake. The exceeds also work fine but I didn't like that Happy and Charle can turn into humans and were mistreated by Fairytail. It seemed too OOC. I understand that the story is an AU but it is a little too much.
The powers, lastly, I would like to make it a point again. It is way too much and exaggerating, making it an overkill.
Please take the time to proofread your work in the future and reanalyze the Canon characters and their personality, even if this fanfic is about to take a very very different turn.

I hope that this review may help you improve in the future. Don't take this too personally as it is only my personal opinion. I am not being a hater here.
I'm sorry if you may feel offended, especially when I just criticized your work. No one likes it when their works are criticized, including me.

Work harder,
Rieko-chan :)
4/8/2014 c18 Shelly22112
Please update this story its really good
3/28/2014 c18 1ImagineMagicForever13
Pleaaase write more begging you.
3/25/2014 c18 1Maiannaise
Woo, go lucy! You tell them whose boss! Haha, great chappy, keep up the great work!
3/19/2014 c18 1TheWolfSlayer5820
I love this please please update soon I can't wait
3/4/2014 c18 Guest
aww so cute! and lucy... i like her style
2/19/2014 c1 1KeefaMighty
I love you for this. This is very well written. Congratulations on making me Ipressed.;-)
1/31/2014 c18 Travis
I love the story plzz update more
1/29/2014 c18 guest
absolutely love it plzzzz write more! I beg you!
1/24/2014 c18 TheCrimsonShinigami
Wow! Your a really good writer! Pllease update soon!
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