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5/3 c9 Guest
I was genuinely enjoying this albeit it was taking a while to get into a crossover however I was thoroughly enjoying it. The plot changes the writing style everything. Now? I won't be continuing reading because I just don't see what the point was for you to make sirius harrys bio farther just to rip him away again absolutely pointless if you kept him alive that plot would have been amazing now tho it's absolutely a pointless plot which just makes me think there will be many more as such down the line. Thoroughly disappointed.
4/7 c11 Meepmorp04
So in the earlier christmas scene you state that Molly’s animal is a cat of some kind and Arthur’s animal is a crow. Now they are a mouse and a cat respectively.

Could you focus on this when editing both chapters?
3/27 c1 journeyman3929
dean, theres nothing wrong with that. technically, we are all related...according to the bible and according to science.
3/26 c63 Akira Inugami
It is great to hear that you are ok. If you need another beta I would be happy to volunteer. If you don't feel up to it after reviewing it that is understandable. I love the way that you world build and merge them but still make it your own. Also being able to show other sides of what is going on. I am looking forward to anything new that you post here.
12/19/2024 c2 deanisaur
wtf? did u actually make the twins have incestuous relationship?
11/24/2024 c44 13N7 Greek-Valkyrie
Sif: Don't magic to fight the Aesir.
Me: Thats stupid as hell. If you are going to go all out on the stuff you know, so am I. To willingly tie ones hand behind their back in a fight is insanity.
11/24/2024 c63 ImmortalsDoItForever
I just discovered story, and spent the better part of a week reading it. It is really fantastic, I enjoyed it very much. That said, you are just getting to the part I most wanted to read, so I really hope you decide continue it.

Heeeere bunny bunny bunny. Go give Mr. Hate ideas for this story.
11/1/2024 c1 Maggot Soul
Soul Sendant, you are the one who is complete trash. Half maggot freak.
10/6/2024 c63 32dancingkatz
i don't know if you still check your ff account, but I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this wonderful and engaging crossover. i've spent the past 4 days reading more or less non-stop, and my imagination is running wild with guesses about what could happen next. it's been a long time (literally years) since that has happened to me, and I want to thank you for it. I hope that you are OK and life is being good to you.
9/17/2024 c63 Maverick123214685
I for one, love teeth. And I hope to see a continuation of it. There’s no need to stick to the MCU plots. Infact I think yours makes more sense than their complete re-imagining of norse mythology.

Please continue writing this story!
9/17/2024 c60 Maverick123214685
Isn’t he due to take his rune mastery soon, and update the hogwarts wards?
9/16/2024 c42 Mav
You have harry remove his clothes. You may have mentioned before, but isn’t an animagus meant to transform with their clothes?
9/16/2024 c40 Mav
I don’t like that you killed metis, especially that you implied she was soulless. As a familiar of harry and a magical snake of that degree of strength and power, she should’ve survived the transport.
9/16/2024 c27 Maverick123214685
I want to know who cursed harry. Cause if he was hit in the back, it sounds like it was an auror.
9/8/2024 c63 mkx
Congratulations on still being alive! I’m glad you’re doing better than you have been, and are taking care of yourself. Even if this wasn’t an update, it spurred me to re-read the fic, and I still love it. Overall I’m gonna call it a win ;V I hope life continues to go decent for you, and you rediscover your passions, even if that passion isn’t this fic. 3
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