
2/5/2014 c30
30Welcome to the New
This was a great chapter! And it was a great ending :) I'm really excited to see where you go with the third book, and Ally and Beck's relationship. They make such a cute couple

This was a great chapter! And it was a great ending :) I'm really excited to see where you go with the third book, and Ally and Beck's relationship. They make such a cute couple
2/5/2014 c30 mach5plus1
That was a great ending even though it seemed kinda cheesy! It did make me like, 100 times more excited for book 3. I'll be eagerly waiting for book 3! I love your series and its amazing continuation of basically everything that's happened! I know book 3 will be absolutely fantastic!
That was a great ending even though it seemed kinda cheesy! It did make me like, 100 times more excited for book 3. I'll be eagerly waiting for book 3! I love your series and its amazing continuation of basically everything that's happened! I know book 3 will be absolutely fantastic!
2/5/2014 c30
2super duper spidey fan
awesome! :) whenever the next book is posted is fine- take your time! :) have a great day, awesome person! :)

awesome! :) whenever the next book is posted is fine- take your time! :) have a great day, awesome person! :)
2/4/2014 c30
2TheUprisingBegins6712
That. Was. AMAZING! I totally loved it and psyched to read Book 3. Ugh those feels for Beck and Ally are spool strong though... its just perfect

That. Was. AMAZING! I totally loved it and psyched to read Book 3. Ugh those feels for Beck and Ally are spool strong though... its just perfect
2/4/2014 c30 AnimeAngel
The base kind of reminds me of District Thirteen. Great Ending! I'll be looking out for Book 3! I have really enjoyed the series so far!
The base kind of reminds me of District Thirteen. Great Ending! I'll be looking out for Book 3! I have really enjoyed the series so far!
1/29/2014 c29 mach5plus1
I have no words remainimg ... oh my users... I can't wait to see how this all wraps up and yay Beck and Ally finally together, I've been excited for that!
I have no words remainimg ... oh my users... I can't wait to see how this all wraps up and yay Beck and Ally finally together, I've been excited for that!
1/21/2014 c28 mach5plus1
I'll be honest I skipped like half of the chapter because I knew Beck would find out about Alpha and I was overly excited to read that. I did go back and read the rest (with my cat, who also found the chapter exciting). I don't want this book to end (I'm probably going to say that until the end) but then I want to see how the book wraps up! I'm always going to say keep up the great work and I've never been so excited for a Fan fiction to be updated until I read your book.
I'll be honest I skipped like half of the chapter because I knew Beck would find out about Alpha and I was overly excited to read that. I did go back and read the rest (with my cat, who also found the chapter exciting). I don't want this book to end (I'm probably going to say that until the end) but then I want to see how the book wraps up! I'm always going to say keep up the great work and I've never been so excited for a Fan fiction to be updated until I read your book.
1/15/2014 c27
30Welcome to the New
Poor Tron! I knew that it was going to happen, but the poor guy doesn't deserve to be repurposed like this! At least it sounds like they found Alpha. That's one thing to be relieved about. Hopefully everything will be alright in the end, but I doubt that's the case.
Another great chapter, and I look forward to more :)

Poor Tron! I knew that it was going to happen, but the poor guy doesn't deserve to be repurposed like this! At least it sounds like they found Alpha. That's one thing to be relieved about. Hopefully everything will be alright in the end, but I doubt that's the case.
Another great chapter, and I look forward to more :)
1/14/2014 c27 mach5plus1
I literally started crying at this chapter. So many feels and just flat out sadness. This chapter was so emotional in a good way and I have no words. I still love all the books and now that Tron was repurposed I can't wait to see where you take this book next. Keep up the updates and your creative mind!
I literally started crying at this chapter. So many feels and just flat out sadness. This chapter was so emotional in a good way and I have no words. I still love all the books and now that Tron was repurposed I can't wait to see where you take this book next. Keep up the updates and your creative mind!
1/14/2014 c27
2super duper spidey fan
awesome, as always! :)
hey, you wanna take my biology final? ;) please? XD

awesome, as always! :)
hey, you wanna take my biology final? ;) please? XD
1/7/2014 c26 Guest
Whoa... That...was...an...awesome...chapter.
Whoa... That...was...an...awesome...chapter.