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2/18/2014 c2 3lexabean
Just have Broyles call her Dunham. It's the first last name that's only ever recorded here in the US so it renders the second almost obsolete. I think I had stumbled by this but didn't read past this chapter because of that. It just didn't make sense.
7/15/2013 c5 Guest
omg this is really good.. post more often, your really great. i love how the story is rolling. :)
7/10/2013 c5 Guest
This was a nice little chapter. Looking forward to reading more!
7/8/2013 c4 Alexis Ortiz
omg i love this story. its so good. keep writing till you think the story has a proper ending. Your really good!
7/5/2013 c4 tln67
great chapter! enjoying the story!
7/1/2013 c2 Guest
nice work with the chapter
6/22/2013 c1 JOY-smile19
This chapter is adorable, I can't wait to read more! :)
6/21/2013 c1 seguist
A good beginning. Well written. I think you do Walter well.
6/21/2013 c1 tln67
just wonderful!

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