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11/2/2022 c7 2SEEKER452
great start hate the jump back and forth in the time line it give away and can give headace
9/20/2021 c7 Danirodriguez1995
Please continue, the story is very good, Please don't give up, a story that the truth has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a huge fan of this type of story and the truth is they have no comparison.
2/22/2020 c5 Bluehaireddemon49
No shit is that a real fact?
12/2/2019 c1 1MonsterCritic96
Kit is Foxes and Pup is Wolves
4/5/2019 c5 Gamma-X
Oh my god... Narumi better not be no fuckin' Yandere! She deserves to die if she is!
Also like the Minato x Mikoto action.
11/18/2018 c7 Guest
Nul comme fiction jai rien compris
9/3/2018 c1 Guest
Your truly a good person for adopting. Enjoyed the fanfic
12/28/2017 c7 Guest
Why have u abandoned the story ? It is such a great story .. update if u can
11/26/2016 c6 nenopip
This was a mess
8/6/2016 c1 akanelaxa10
make more chapters please
9/22/2015 c7 Guest
11/12/2014 c7 2Qriiz
nice one, gonna follow this story.

I can't quite grasp Narumi and particularly Naruto's motivation.
so far he'd mention Narumi, vengeance, to protect, to be the strongest, acknowledgement. all while saying one thing and denying the other to several people. I hope you did this intentionally.

and, you could use some beta reader.
11/10/2014 c2 1CosmicBeing
Alright I've read enough. Shove that weak Naruto and canon shit right back up your ass.
10/17/2014 c1 Guest
You should put a page break when you jumped from the prison break plan, to talking to Kabuto.
10/6/2014 c2 Guest
your a fucking idiot konoha haters are thevscum of the earth haters should die and spot spouting there hatefull shit to everyone making naruto join orochimaru really? maybe you should go fuck yourself
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