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8/28/2014 c7 Madgormley
Excellent story i really hope to see more updates on this
8/13/2014 c7 kunt-destroyer420
Seems I was right with my first review.
7/21/2014 c3 5Tenma Sosei
Oh hell no. I was hoping Naruto be pairing with his sister. Well good luck. NarutoxNarumi 4 life. Kakashi can lick Sasukes sack for all I care.
7/18/2014 c7 9Wrath of The Sun Deity
Why aren't you continuing this story
6/5/2014 c7 1yindragonkiba
Like it like it!
5/26/2014 c7 Y u no update
Y u no update
5/1/2014 c5 Guest
i do not see why mikoto would cheat and have sex with minato when she knew he was the reason for narutos loneliness and destroy her own family
2/26/2014 c2 Guest
You ruined, I don't like spoilers, your method though unique is annoying and to me a spoiler, what fun is there when the ending is already revealed?

The only entertainment is HOW...the others are all long gone...shame...I liked the first chapter
2/9/2014 c7 LordoftheFlamingFoxes
Can u please make this less confusing? There are to many time skips and switching of perspectives which sort of ruin the entire experience and leave me wondering what just happened in the plot.
2/3/2014 c7 SpectreCL
Death to Minatooo xD He deserves to die
2/2/2014 c7 2Ame no Kagaseo
Great chapter; minor typos, but not many.
I wonder who or what has enough balls to raze down a village near Ame. Hidan, perhaps?
2/2/2014 c7 Guest
wonder what will happen to Mikoto's kid when Kushina gets it togheter and she discover her husband cheated on her wirh her best friend
2/2/2014 c7 RikudoNaruto1
good chapter
2/2/2014 c7 7jh831
estimates kind f seen off, with all the training naruto has had, shouldn't he be at least 5's all the way down?
anyway, cant wait to see what happens next
1/18/2014 c6 1Windninja1000
This is a great fic, I can't wait till the next chapter! :D
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