for Broken Clockwork10/6/2014 c2 Guest
your a fucking idiot konoha haters are thevscum of the earth haters should die and spot spouting there hatefull shit to everyone making naruto join orochimaru really? maybe you should go fuck yourself
your a fucking idiot konoha haters are thevscum of the earth haters should die and spot spouting there hatefull shit to everyone making naruto join orochimaru really? maybe you should go fuck yourself
7/21/2014 c3 
5Tenma Sosei
Oh hell no. I was hoping Naruto be pairing with his sister. Well good luck. NarutoxNarumi 4 life. Kakashi can lick Sasukes sack for all I care.
5Tenma SoseiOh hell no. I was hoping Naruto be pairing with his sister. Well good luck. NarutoxNarumi 4 life. Kakashi can lick Sasukes sack for all I care.
5/26/2014 c7 Y u no update
Y u no update
Y u no update
5/1/2014 c5 Guest
i do not see why mikoto would cheat and have sex with minato when she knew he was the reason for narutos loneliness and destroy her own family
i do not see why mikoto would cheat and have sex with minato when she knew he was the reason for narutos loneliness and destroy her own family
2/26/2014 c2 Guest
You ruined, I don't like spoilers, your method though unique is annoying and to me a spoiler, what fun is there when the ending is already revealed?
The only entertainment is HOW...the others are all long gone...shame...I liked the first chapter
You ruined, I don't like spoilers, your method though unique is annoying and to me a spoiler, what fun is there when the ending is already revealed?
The only entertainment is HOW...the others are all long gone...shame...I liked the first chapter
2/9/2014 c7 LordoftheFlamingFoxes
Can u please make this less confusing? There are to many time skips and switching of perspectives which sort of ruin the entire experience and leave me wondering what just happened in the plot.
Can u please make this less confusing? There are to many time skips and switching of perspectives which sort of ruin the entire experience and leave me wondering what just happened in the plot.
2/2/2014 c7 2Ame no Kagaseo
Great chapter; minor typos, but not many.
I wonder who or what has enough balls to raze down a village near Ame. Hidan, perhaps?
2Ame no KagaseoGreat chapter; minor typos, but not many.
I wonder who or what has enough balls to raze down a village near Ame. Hidan, perhaps?
2/2/2014 c7 Guest
wonder what will happen to Mikoto's kid when Kushina gets it togheter and she discover her husband cheated on her wirh her best friend
wonder what will happen to Mikoto's kid when Kushina gets it togheter and she discover her husband cheated on her wirh her best friend