for Always, Forever, Eternity3/12/2019 c11 sakshishetty3003
Please don't discontinue this story. I hope you continue this story. Can't wait for the next chapter
Please don't discontinue this story. I hope you continue this story. Can't wait for the next chapter
5/26/2017 c11 YuiKatsuragi1036
Oh my god...so great..one of the story that really captured my intention..nowadays are really hard to find cool story about nalu..and finally i came across with this one..i had never feel so grateful in my life... this story is so nicely done..the way you make the scene..the passion you put in every line ..i can feel it when i read'em...honestly never in my mind truly believed there will be a story that made natsu fall in love with lucy while she was still a child..hahaha..that's freaking hilarious..but damn you just to have put together in this piece single story..I'm so happy to read it..thank you..i want to cry whenever lucy cry...huhuhu..oh please do update soon..i will be waiting..please don't let lucy die ..give some happiness for natsu...poor him..Your story is really great i love it..thank you so much ..i meant it..bye
Oh my god...so great..one of the story that really captured my intention..nowadays are really hard to find cool story about nalu..and finally i came across with this one..i had never feel so grateful in my life... this story is so nicely done..the way you make the scene..the passion you put in every line ..i can feel it when i read'em...honestly never in my mind truly believed there will be a story that made natsu fall in love with lucy while she was still a child..hahaha..that's freaking hilarious..but damn you just to have put together in this piece single story..I'm so happy to read it..thank you..i want to cry whenever lucy cry...huhuhu..oh please do update soon..i will be waiting..please don't let lucy die ..give some happiness for natsu...poor him..Your story is really great i love it..thank you so much ..i meant it..bye
5/15/2017 c11 
9TheBayMan
Great story so far! I know it hasn't been updated in a few months... So I'm hoping you'll be back in time with a new chapter and if you don't, then I'd like to say how much I enjoyed reading it!
Thank you for a well written and very compelling story!
9TheBayManGreat story so far! I know it hasn't been updated in a few months... So I'm hoping you'll be back in time with a new chapter and if you don't, then I'd like to say how much I enjoyed reading it!
Thank you for a well written and very compelling story!
4/27/2017 c11 5arika001
when i read its summary i already knew i was going to like it but this much?! I never expected. This story is damn good. I'm waiting for the next chap
5arika001when i read its summary i already knew i was going to like it but this much?! I never expected. This story is damn good. I'm waiting for the next chap
2/10/2017 c11 Guest
This is such a great story. I really hope you finish it one day :)
This is such a great story. I really hope you finish it one day :)
1/24/2017 c11 fazzz. z
The ending was not good. I feel so speechless.
The ending was not good. I feel so speechless.
1/15/2017 c11 Guest
Woah... THIS IS AWESOME!
Woah... THIS IS AWESOME!
1/15/2017 c8 Guest
Layla?! Or maybe Michelle? Nahhh cant be her... AND WHO IS THIS LADY LAYLA(?) MADE A PROMISE WITH?!
Layla?! Or maybe Michelle? Nahhh cant be her... AND WHO IS THIS LADY LAYLA(?) MADE A PROMISE WITH?!
1/15/2017 c7 Guest
Okay... sooooo, uhmmm while I LOVED this is it wrong for me to wish that when Lucy was being beat up and kicked after Urano Metria she had made a marking on the ground and make the sky pitch black with all the constellations there and as Jackal was confused/shocked she rolled out and then whispered some words in another language or something and then using almost all of her magic and almost ALMOST killing herself summons the Celstial Spirit King who flicks Jackal the finger () and crushes him... so yea
Okay... sooooo, uhmmm while I LOVED this is it wrong for me to wish that when Lucy was being beat up and kicked after Urano Metria she had made a marking on the ground and make the sky pitch black with all the constellations there and as Jackal was confused/shocked she rolled out and then whispered some words in another language or something and then using almost all of her magic and almost ALMOST killing herself summons the Celstial Spirit King who flicks Jackal the finger () and crushes him... so yea
9/20/2016 c11 122Dark Shining Light
I love the story so much but I think you broke me at the end. Poor natsu and Lucy. They deserve too be happy T.T
122Dark Shining LightI love the story so much but I think you broke me at the end. Poor natsu and Lucy. They deserve too be happy T.T
9/1/2016 c11 LunarWolfDragon
Plz update soon the suspence is killing me I need to know what is in the heartfelia clan that has to do with Lucy and the Nalu in this story is amazing wishing Natsu would tell Lucy he is her mate tho anyway update asap
Plz update soon the suspence is killing me I need to know what is in the heartfelia clan that has to do with Lucy and the Nalu in this story is amazing wishing Natsu would tell Lucy he is her mate tho anyway update asap
8/31/2016 c11 BloodRedRubies
Oh my gosh the storm is coming and the angst is getting stronger! i cant take itwhat did he mean by he cant save lucy? is lucy alright or just unconcious. that just cruel he finally found his mate then to lose her again in the future because of the curse of her bloodline. so tragic, i hope it doesnt end that way
Oh my gosh the storm is coming and the angst is getting stronger! i cant take itwhat did he mean by he cant save lucy? is lucy alright or just unconcious. that just cruel he finally found his mate then to lose her again in the future because of the curse of her bloodline. so tragic, i hope it doesnt end that way