for Ceres's Story6/25/2013 c1 Guest
I agree with Tikatu. You write well. Please write something we can relate to.
I agree with Tikatu. You write well. Please write something we can relate to.
6/24/2013 c1 
42Tikatu
"We've all heard about Scott's assignment."
From where? Canon? Uh, no. Some other fan fic? If so, you should be giving credit to that author and showing where you got the idea. A challenge on another site, or a forum on this site? How about cluing us in on it, then?
Obviously, we haven't ALL "heard about Scott's assignment". On top of this, it's yet another Tracy sister fic (a twin, no less!) that is more about the sister than the Tracys. Your writing skills are above par; a tweak or two for mechanics would make them a true pleasure to read. So, how about writing a story about the guys we know and love?
42Tikatu"We've all heard about Scott's assignment."
From where? Canon? Uh, no. Some other fan fic? If so, you should be giving credit to that author and showing where you got the idea. A challenge on another site, or a forum on this site? How about cluing us in on it, then?
Obviously, we haven't ALL "heard about Scott's assignment". On top of this, it's yet another Tracy sister fic (a twin, no less!) that is more about the sister than the Tracys. Your writing skills are above par; a tweak or two for mechanics would make them a true pleasure to read. So, how about writing a story about the guys we know and love?