for The Coming Frost3/8/2016 c1 Nick
Wow this is really good hope write more for this
Wow this is really good hope write more for this
11/24/2014 c1 Guest
This really looks like a great story! Please post more chapters!
This really looks like a great story! Please post more chapters!
7/29/2014 c1 flitter flutter
This would be such an awesome multi-chapter fic...might you be willing to try that?
This would be such an awesome multi-chapter fic...might you be willing to try that?
6/10/2014 c1 SistersForLife
I love this. Could you please continue?
I love this. Could you please continue?
11/20/2013 c1 ThatOnePerson
OMG...that made me cry a little... But please, continue this story if it's not a oneshot. Please! Great job by the way! Later!
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OMG...that made me cry a little... But please, continue this story if it's not a oneshot. Please! Great job by the way! Later!
Z
11/15/2013 c1 ThatOnePerson
I'll be honest, but that made me cry. I'm sobbing right now...and it's kinda hard to see. So, good job! You're a great writer! Here's a waffle!
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I'll be honest, but that made me cry. I'm sobbing right now...and it's kinda hard to see. So, good job! You're a great writer! Here's a waffle!
#.Z
7/25/2013 c1 
42twilighteve-writes
This kinda feels a bit... dark. But I like it, it's really interesting. I just feel that Fiona is a bit too evil... (I don't know what word would be best to describe her). And the other complain is that... The chapter's too short.
42twilighteve-writesThis kinda feels a bit... dark. But I like it, it's really interesting. I just feel that Fiona is a bit too evil... (I don't know what word would be best to describe her). And the other complain is that... The chapter's too short.