for A Hunger Games Poem : A World of Love and War11/21/2014 c3 
4cool bnr
Verse one was my favorite by far, but you totally killed the repetition part of it. Much love xx
4cool bnrVerse one was my favorite by far, but you totally killed the repetition part of it. Much love xx
1/28/2014 c2 2kelster07
I'm not usually a poem reader, but I decided to give this a shot. I love the rhyming patterns in this and the 'all is fair in love and war' theme to start each poem. Just one little thing, you wrote 'depends what you here', but do you mean 'depends what you hear?'. Maybe it's just me. And I LOVED the ending, because it closed things off really well. :)
2kelster07I'm not usually a poem reader, but I decided to give this a shot. I love the rhyming patterns in this and the 'all is fair in love and war' theme to start each poem. Just one little thing, you wrote 'depends what you here', but do you mean 'depends what you hear?'. Maybe it's just me. And I LOVED the ending, because it closed things off really well. :)