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7/2/2013 c1 91the lola
Oh this was lovely! I love this characterization of Astoria, I imagine her a lot like this. I love how her and Draco fit together because they've both 'cut their strings' and I love that she taught herself how to cut her strings (which is a lovely metaphor, by the way) I loved how this was laid out. Your repetitiveness with 'red red red, tried tried tried' was really effective too.
6/28/2013 c1 2Ninzdancingshoes
Loved it. Seriously, I am so longwinded when I write. I couldn't do something like this if it had to save my life. This is amazing. :)
6/26/2013 c1 12Princess Unikitty
i liked it!

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