for Fate7/9/2018 c8 Guest
STOP THIS! THIS IS SENSELESS SLAUGHTER, PLEASE STOP THIS MADNESS NOW
STOP THIS! THIS IS SENSELESS SLAUGHTER, PLEASE STOP THIS MADNESS NOW
4/24/2017 c12 Guest
NO! Damn them! Please continue to write and protest against them. I don't know what I'd do with these beloved fanfics ; – ;. I'm sorry I can't help, I'm only ten so:( . . . . DON'T QUESTION ME! I'M JUST WEIRD LIKE THAT!\_/
NO! Damn them! Please continue to write and protest against them. I don't know what I'd do with these beloved fanfics ; – ;. I'm sorry I can't help, I'm only ten so:( . . . . DON'T QUESTION ME! I'M JUST WEIRD LIKE THAT!\_/
1/14/2016 c12 guest
Your a fucking monster I read this fic and so far its been nothing but torturing a kid I mean what the hell is wrong with you why would you ever want to depict a child being tortured this heavily it doesn't even qualify as teen fic its a mature one a extremely bad one at that
Your a fucking monster I read this fic and so far its been nothing but torturing a kid I mean what the hell is wrong with you why would you ever want to depict a child being tortured this heavily it doesn't even qualify as teen fic its a mature one a extremely bad one at that
8/9/2014 c11 Shadowed Black Heart
Oh no... Young Link! Stay strong!
Love your story. Please update soon! I need to know what will happen.
Oh no... Young Link! Stay strong!
Love your story. Please update soon! I need to know what will happen.
3/16/2014 c9 BlueKeyblades
Btw BlueKeyblades is with capital K and the second B is not capitalized... just saying...
But good chapter. Got to go play Portal 2.
Btw BlueKeyblades is with capital K and the second B is not capitalized... just saying...
But good chapter. Got to go play Portal 2.
3/15/2014 c11 
62Majora's Mask Freak184
Holy crap... Woman! SNEAK PREVIEW! MORE TORTURE!
By the way, why did YL have that dream?
62Majora's Mask Freak184Holy crap... Woman! SNEAK PREVIEW! MORE TORTURE!
By the way, why did YL have that dream?
3/15/2014 c11 CupcakePride101
Omg Midna was possessed!? Woahhhh o.o
I wonder who was that girl who killed her dreadful parents :o I bet she has a connection with Young Link.
Omg Midna was possessed!? Woahhhh o.o
I wonder who was that girl who killed her dreadful parents :o I bet she has a connection with Young Link.
2/17/2014 c10 Majora's Mask Freak184
Holy crap, woman... You're giving me a sneak preview, whether you like it or not!
Wait, I thought "FREAK" was on YL's neck, not "Aya"...
Holy crap, woman... You're giving me a sneak preview, whether you like it or not!
Wait, I thought "FREAK" was on YL's neck, not "Aya"...
2/17/2014 c10 CupcakePride101
Ahhhh I see. Ok then.
Ben's here yay :D I wonder if he's worse than Aya o.e
Ahhhh I see. Ok then.
Ben's here yay :D I wonder if he's worse than Aya o.e
1/23/2014 c9 Sideswipe124
(Fanfiction won't let me sign in right now)
Alright, I do enjoy this story, do not mistake that. I honestly do.
It's great. I love Midna and Link's character's. They make me laugh really hard. It's great xD
Now. To the parts that could use some tweking
The torture parts aren't bad. They're just...repetative. It's just, the past couple chapters have been, "WHERE IS HE?!"
"Idk, yolo." *beatings* "Youre stupid!"
I'm just suggesting, maybe use Zelda as a way for Young Link to talk, instead of the beatings all the time. I mean, it just appears that there is starting to be a pattern, ya know? Young Link, as a ten year old, would have given up the information, or just died from all the torture. And never result to rape. Just don't. Please xD
Here is an ideaaa. Have Young Link be in the same room as Zelda, and have him tied or restained or something. And every time he says he doesn't know, Ganondorf be like, "Oh, that was the wrong answer."
It's just, change it up ya know?
I hope you don't find me to be harsh... It's a great story, that just kind of bothered me. Make there be more time between Link and Midna!:DD
And hurry the heck up and make another chapter, woman!
(Fanfiction won't let me sign in right now)
Alright, I do enjoy this story, do not mistake that. I honestly do.
It's great. I love Midna and Link's character's. They make me laugh really hard. It's great xD
Now. To the parts that could use some tweking
The torture parts aren't bad. They're just...repetative. It's just, the past couple chapters have been, "WHERE IS HE?!"
"Idk, yolo." *beatings* "Youre stupid!"
I'm just suggesting, maybe use Zelda as a way for Young Link to talk, instead of the beatings all the time. I mean, it just appears that there is starting to be a pattern, ya know? Young Link, as a ten year old, would have given up the information, or just died from all the torture. And never result to rape. Just don't. Please xD
Here is an ideaaa. Have Young Link be in the same room as Zelda, and have him tied or restained or something. And every time he says he doesn't know, Ganondorf be like, "Oh, that was the wrong answer."
It's just, change it up ya know?
I hope you don't find me to be harsh... It's a great story, that just kind of bothered me. Make there be more time between Link and Midna!:DD
And hurry the heck up and make another chapter, woman!
1/21/2014 c9 Majora's Mask Freak184
My baby! He was gonna hurt himself! D':
Great chapter, sis! :D
Wow. That's a whole new side of Melinda...
More torture next chapter! :D
Also, I like him being called "Young Link".
My baby! He was gonna hurt himself! D':
Great chapter, sis! :D
Wow. That's a whole new side of Melinda...
More torture next chapter! :D
Also, I like him being called "Young Link".
1/21/2014 c9 CupcakePride101
Wow! That's so shocking that Melinda had such a past :o
I like Knil. What about Linky? :P If Young Link was Toon Link, I would've said Toony.
Wow! That's so shocking that Melinda had such a past :o
I like Knil. What about Linky? :P If Young Link was Toon Link, I would've said Toony.
1/18/2014 c1 BlueKeyblades
Nize ztory it waz really good zomehow made me cry!?
Nize ztory it waz really good zomehow made me cry!?
1/16/2014 c8 CupcakePride101
OMG Is Clep dead!? D: And also, how is Young Link still alive from this!? o.e
OMG Is Clep dead!? D: And also, how is Young Link still alive from this!? o.e
1/16/2014 c8 Majora's Mask Freak184
Holy crap! Holy crap! Holy crap! Holy crap! Holy crap! Holy crap! Holy crap! Oh, and did I mention "holy crap"? That was the greatest chapter, but the worst thing that's ever happened to my angel! Where do you come up with this stuff, you genius?!
I have nothing to say to this, because it's just so holy crap... I'm so holy crapped right now...
You're welcome! Use Aya anytime! Use any of my characters anytime! :D
Thanks! :D
He had to cut off the infection... He had "FREAK" written on him... He had "Aya's Property" written on him... Holy crap... What's Aya gonna do, since Link's "Aya's property"? O.O
Holy crap! Holy crap! Holy crap! Holy crap! Holy crap! Holy crap! Holy crap! Oh, and did I mention "holy crap"? That was the greatest chapter, but the worst thing that's ever happened to my angel! Where do you come up with this stuff, you genius?!
I have nothing to say to this, because it's just so holy crap... I'm so holy crapped right now...
You're welcome! Use Aya anytime! Use any of my characters anytime! :D
Thanks! :D
He had to cut off the infection... He had "FREAK" written on him... He had "Aya's Property" written on him... Holy crap... What's Aya gonna do, since Link's "Aya's property"? O.O