
7/4/2013 c1 softsilver
Amazing one-shot! I've never really read a ScorLily (is that what they're called?) before, but I decided to give it a try, and I'm glad that I did. You're a talented writer! Keep writing
Amazing one-shot! I've never really read a ScorLily (is that what they're called?) before, but I decided to give it a try, and I'm glad that I did. You're a talented writer! Keep writing
7/2/2013 c1
91the lola
Oh I love ScorLily! I just love how you've written these two, in a way that they very well fit together. I loved the dialogue at the beginning, how they sort of just bounced off of each other. Your writing has a fantastic flow to it, I just love it!

Oh I love ScorLily! I just love how you've written these two, in a way that they very well fit together. I loved the dialogue at the beginning, how they sort of just bounced off of each other. Your writing has a fantastic flow to it, I just love it!
6/28/2013 c1 CB
"Marble skin carved by Michelangelo, wild copper hair painted with the dramatic brushstrokes of Van Gogh."
Loved this sentence.
Thank you.
"Marble skin carved by Michelangelo, wild copper hair painted with the dramatic brushstrokes of Van Gogh."
Loved this sentence.
Thank you.
6/27/2013 c1
2Ninzdancingshoes
Oh my gosh! I hate you for making this just a small little piece. I love it. A lot. You should definitely expand on this. Make it longer, with more depth between the two of them. This could be something, don't write it off (no pun intended). I really liked this. Finger paintings... yeah. I really like it. That's my humble opinion. :)

Oh my gosh! I hate you for making this just a small little piece. I love it. A lot. You should definitely expand on this. Make it longer, with more depth between the two of them. This could be something, don't write it off (no pun intended). I really liked this. Finger paintings... yeah. I really like it. That's my humble opinion. :)