for Inappropriate Touching6/12/2022 c27 
2LogladyJ
I genuinely loved this story. Your Edward reminds me of how I write him in my fic (he’s horrid at first but turns into a common sense free, lovable derp after a big realisation). He also reminds me of Love In My Box Edward, which is one of my favourites. I’ll be checking out your other writing for sure xxxxx
2LogladyJI genuinely loved this story. Your Edward reminds me of how I write him in my fic (he’s horrid at first but turns into a common sense free, lovable derp after a big realisation). He also reminds me of Love In My Box Edward, which is one of my favourites. I’ll be checking out your other writing for sure xxxxx
6/23/2020 c27 StrawberryFreesia
I don't really understand this ending to be honest but as you are the author and it's your creative decision I will respect it. I don't neccesairily want to kill Alice anymore but I would love for Bella to get more of a chance to yell at Alice...put her in her place and make Alice gobsmacked and them maybe slam a door in her face or hang up on her. Oooooh or set Rose on Alice...or Dr Cullen. It's sad that Carlisle never met Esme before she died.
Finally this story has made me worried and feel for all those struggling with OCD that struggles with the thought of germs and infection (I know not all people with OCD fear germs...though I bet it's still tricky with routine changes and stuff) during this time of corona virus being all over the news and a concern to everyone.
I don't really understand this ending to be honest but as you are the author and it's your creative decision I will respect it. I don't neccesairily want to kill Alice anymore but I would love for Bella to get more of a chance to yell at Alice...put her in her place and make Alice gobsmacked and them maybe slam a door in her face or hang up on her. Oooooh or set Rose on Alice...or Dr Cullen. It's sad that Carlisle never met Esme before she died.
Finally this story has made me worried and feel for all those struggling with OCD that struggles with the thought of germs and infection (I know not all people with OCD fear germs...though I bet it's still tricky with routine changes and stuff) during this time of corona virus being all over the news and a concern to everyone.
6/22/2020 c7 StrawberryFreesia
Such a beautiful letter Edward. Bella will consider him her soulmate as soon as she reads about his respect for 18th century gloves...although she might be sad they're not latex :D
Such a beautiful letter Edward. Bella will consider him her soulmate as soon as she reads about his respect for 18th century gloves...although she might be sad they're not latex :D
6/22/2020 c6 StrawberryFreesia
Can we murder Alice? Pretty pretty please. Maybe slap Angela a little too? Both Bella and Edward's illnesses remind me almost a bit of a coma. Like they are both trapped unable to get out.
Can we murder Alice? Pretty pretty please. Maybe slap Angela a little too? Both Bella and Edward's illnesses remind me almost a bit of a coma. Like they are both trapped unable to get out.
6/22/2020 c3 StrawberryFreesia
I know you described this as a romantic comedy but so far I find it unbearably sad and pretty heartbreaking. I can't stop crying.
I know you described this as a romantic comedy but so far I find it unbearably sad and pretty heartbreaking. I can't stop crying.
11/15/2019 c27 entity1127
I read your story, and I didn't think it was for me. But it pulled me in and refused to let me go until the end. This si truly a great story and I appreciate you sharing with me.
I read your story, and I didn't think it was for me. But it pulled me in and refused to let me go until the end. This si truly a great story and I appreciate you sharing with me.
9/10/2019 c27 Guest
The ending was rather abrupt, nevertheless I absolutely loved this story - thank you for sharing it.
The ending was rather abrupt, nevertheless I absolutely loved this story - thank you for sharing it.
8/13/2019 c27 Nicoconsd
Wow... I was not expecting that ending. I'm glad Bella was brave and strong but I would have loved to hear what Edward said after he closed that door... Even if it was just I love you and kissed her... But that being said this was a fun journey. I have to admit it got me thinking of many times I wanted to wash my hands after touching something... lol But thank you for the fun ride. :)
Wow... I was not expecting that ending. I'm glad Bella was brave and strong but I would have loved to hear what Edward said after he closed that door... Even if it was just I love you and kissed her... But that being said this was a fun journey. I have to admit it got me thinking of many times I wanted to wash my hands after touching something... lol But thank you for the fun ride. :)
5/15/2018 c15 Guest
So Bella doesn't really have a social disorder? Shes acting pretty fucking normal in chapter 15
So Bella doesn't really have a social disorder? Shes acting pretty fucking normal in chapter 15
5/15/2018 c14 Guest
That phone shit was gross. Just straight up not right. Bella was fake as hell.
That phone shit was gross. Just straight up not right. Bella was fake as hell.