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8/4/2013 c7 3spechell
that explain the family name difference i love emmett evn more !
8/4/2013 c6 spechell
i hate alice too
how come emmett last name is hale ?
8/4/2013 c5 spechell
ok i so want to read the letter now!
8/4/2013 c4 spechell
taking care of your shit—" I cringed. "figuratively

aahaha best line ever love it!
8/4/2013 c3 spechell
how do you find all those obssessions ? you did a great job with it anymay§ I love dr cullen and edward interactions they are so funny and the recting thing ? so damn funny !
8/4/2013 c2 spechell
your edward kills me with the yelling and just him in general ! you did a great job in describing his personality
8/4/2013 c1 spechell
thank you for reposting the story i was looking for it for years now! and someone on twilighted give me back the link to the story !
7/29/2013 c26 LibraryLady08
Very enjoyable to read! :)
7/24/2013 c26 mommymac0508
Well he is trying and it really seems that he is getting better and so is Bella now how is Edward going to surprise her update soon
7/22/2013 c26 1JulieToo
Oh, hoping Edward doesn't get too overwhelmed when he surprises Bella! His newly found tolerance of germs is so unexpected (to me). I thought six months would be about the time for him to get over his peculiarities.

I have tried to go back and read this wonderful fic from the beginning, but my RL is getting too demanding. How rude. I'll eventually get past chapter 14...
7/22/2013 c26 AbsurdEnthusiac
The beauty of this chapter just astounds me! I love that Edward has improved but still has his quirks, and I just love these two kids a lot, so visiting their world makes me happy! I am so excited to read how their reunion will go now!
7/22/2013 c26 12MissJanuary
Okay, I've finally caught up with the rest of your readers. Edward in the hospital broken my tiny heart. Can't wait for the next chapter. We need to get this pimped. Why you haven't got more reviews is fucking beyond me.

7/22/2013 c26 Oldenuf2knobeta
The first time I did it, the nurse stopped me as I passed by her station and asked why I was leaving in the middle of rec. I told her I wanted to go to my room to masturbate. She looked away and went back to typing at her computer. I didn't like lying, so after I finished measuring, I masturbated thinking of Bella's shiny hairless vulva.

Pure genius. And totally both sweet and logical. Well, she did ask after all.
I can understand Bella's objection to her vulva being on display ...even if Edward Georia o'Keefed the shit out of it. However , I'm assuming not may passers by would recognise her from her vulva alone.
The piano is such a beautiful gift for Edward...and he didn't even hesitate to touch it. Progress .
..and our Bella is learning to set limits for herself too. Bless.
Great update, Jen.
7/21/2013 c26 LaSpia
Just excellent. So happy you're back! A lovely and sophisticated story. Can't wait to see how they are alone, and if they're really improving. They seem to motivate one another quite well. He makes me laugh so hard, like smuggling the yardstick back to his room, and his excuse to the nurse. So funny, unbeknownst to him, making it all the more amusing.

You're a master!
7/19/2013 c26 Laurie S
Love this story! Keep up the great work!
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