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7/13/2013 c22 roughdraft525
In-patient Edward is so brave!
7/13/2013 c21 roughdraft525
Alice can just get out. Ugh. I loved the Hales, though.
7/13/2013 c20 roughdraft525
Oh dreadful! I absolutely hate when people come to work sick.
7/13/2013 c19 roughdraft525
Buying the café reminds me of Inception. "I bought the airline; it seemed cleaner." Oh, and wow the last bit. Nicely done.
7/13/2013 c18 roughdraft525
Effort from both sides! That's great! This is as far as I've read as of now.
7/13/2013 c17 roughdraft525
I hate when I can't push past my comfort zone, particularly if it impacts others.
7/13/2013 c16 roughdraft525
Oh, Edward. So close.
7/13/2013 c15 roughdraft525
"I liked you better when...nope, I got nuthin'," I admitted.

Ouch. I'm glad Alice is trying.
7/13/2013 c14 roughdraft525
Hottest awkward phone encounter.
7/13/2013 c13 roughdraft525
Jasper's reaction is perfect, and his appreciation of her vulnerability was touching
7/13/2013 c12 roughdraft525
I was so infuriated with Alice here.
7/13/2013 c11 roughdraft525
The Fly POV was a great transition.
7/13/2013 c10 roughdraft525
"I guess he was getting to know the real me...completely un-Alice-filtered...how fun for him."

This was my favorite line, yet, and I love Jasper's reflection in his later POV.
7/13/2013 c9 roughdraft525
I'm so excited for Edward's progress! And so quickly!
7/13/2013 c8 roughdraft525
I love his list! Totally something I might have but not actually share.
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