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7/8/2013 c11 Guest
"It might have been a little creepy, but I suddenly wished I could be a fly on the wall for what was about to happen between those two. Just out of kinky curiosity." Oh, Jasper, you kinky little pervy sub, you! :D
It's really fun reading this for the second time. :)
Lovely, hot, awkward sex scene. Brava!
xo, Cullenboyz
7/8/2013 c10 Guest
Jasper is a dear and a hoot, in addition to being a kinky perv. :)
And Edward...is it wrong that he's adorable when he's so...no, it's not wrong. :3
xo, Cullenboyz
7/8/2013 c9 Guest
Alice and Jasper are just...*shudders*
But I love them.
And I SERIOUSLY love Emmet! He's abfab. :)
xo,
Cullenboyz
7/8/2013 c8 Guest
That was adorable. And tense and even occasionally kind of hot. Love.
xo, Cullenboyz
7/8/2013 c7 Guest
The woman at the police station: BWAH! :D
Edward's letter: awwwww! :'3
xo, Cullenboyz
7/8/2013 c6 Guest
"I put the phone on speaker, turned down the volume and left to make a cup of tea." BUAHAhahaha!
It's all just too wonderful for words. Emmett is fucktabulous. xo, still unable to log in, Cullenboyz
7/8/2013 c5 Guest
Your Alice is completely fabulous. It takes work to makes someone that manic. And I continue to love your Bella. So glad you are back to writing! xoxo Still can't sign in...but this is Cullenboyz
7/8/2013 c4 Guest
I'm reading this for the second time, and it's absolutely just as good and fun as the first! 3
You're HILARIOUS. You're hilarious writing both Edward and Bella, with their outrageously differing personalities. Love. btw, I can't seem to log in. Not on my computer. But this is Cullenboyz. :)
7/10/2013 c25 1PurpleBrina17
So I couldn't sleep one night and I hoped on Twitter and someone rec'd this fic. I love writers that break the mold and go for something totally different. I love this. I can't wait to see what happens to these two.

So Happy I was able to find this. I been rec'ing it myself. Until next time.

Much love, PurpleBrina
7/9/2013 c25 Mkeely
I AM SO GLAD THIS STORY IS BACK!
7/8/2013 c1 2Cullenboyz
Crazy wonderful!
7/7/2013 c25 Robward17
I just spent the last few days re-reading this & literally LOLing thru each & every one. My gawd, how I absolutely Adore these two misfits who are perfect for each other! Honestly, this is one of the best I've Ever read! Linda xo
7/7/2013 c25 garddita17
I love that Edward and Bella are both getting the help they need. I think that when they are reunited they can begin to move forward together.
7/7/2013 c24 garddita17
It's good to have you and this story back. You have been missed.
7/5/2013 c25 LaSpia
Great chapter. You're such an insightful writer. Lines like " the dulcet tones of polite evil" are just wonderful. I know there's a reason for this, but you've skipped over the actual sessions with Edward where Bella is in attendance, presumably to recall them in flashback. But I was dying to read her response to him ( and he- her) when they finally saw one another for the first time. There's such an electric energy between them, and she didn't know if he would be his old self. On a re-read of the prior chapter, I was also concerned when the nurse sensed his energy at the piano and pray he did not partake of her creepy obsession.

Then Bella's reference to the "humiliation" of his paintings"? Dying to know what that's about? Perhaps his memories and desire of their physical relationship, which, with them, is hard to separate from the non-physical? Hmmm.

And then theres Alice. I realize shes a necessary pain-in-the ass, but she takes and takes. Carlisle is awesome, tedious, but awesome.

Genius!

PS. I've assumes the crash position on more than one occasion, and I remain free, miraculously!
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