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7/3/2013 c16 chicalicious
Lmao! Oh no! Edward forgot that the wasn't supposed to mention last night. OOPS! Loved the public grope and make out session.

7/3/2013 c15 chicalicious
"Bad pussy," I scolded her. "Dry up, and put your Mature Woman of Substance panties on. We've got to deal with Alice...this is no time to be weeping and begging for two shower-gasms in a row...greedy bitch."-this line is just hilarious and awesome!
I love Bella sticking up for herself and making Alice squirm!

7/3/2013 c14 chicalicious
Haha! I have missed these two SO MUCH! I'm not sure why you reposted everything and I'm even more unsure about what chapter I read and reviewed last so for some odd reason I decided to start here.

7/3/2013 c25 AbsurdEnthusiac
I must tell you that when I saw all of the chapter alerts in one day, I was COMPELLED to read your story again from the beginning! I love, love, love these characters and the story line so very much. I got back in touch with how much and why I do. The inner dialogue you write is so wonderful, whimsical and real at the same time. I am loving that you came back to it to finish! Thanks so much, hope life was good to you while you were "out there" in the real world. :o )
7/3/2013 c25 Maggie J Masen
Such a good chapter!
7/3/2013 c25 Debbi84
Happy that Edward's getting out. Now we need to get Alice in some kind of therapy. Great chapter.
7/3/2013 c25 11savannavansmutsmut
Yeah! He'll be out in a week. I can't wait for him to get home. I'm sure latex will still be involved. ;P
7/3/2013 c7 misyx
"I earned this privilege because I ate her muffin last week."

7/2/2013 c5 misyx
Bella is so deadpan. Such a different voice from Edward, but just as cracked:

"Anyway, I much prefered being hung up on."

"When she does this, I have fantasies where I burn her at the stake."
7/2/2013 c4 misyx
Mal, Jayne, and stupid science fiction for the win!
7/2/2013 c3 misyx
I cackled here: "Ah, But's asshole cousin."
7/2/2013 c2 misyx
LOL moment: "Which apart from being nonsensical, was also disgusting!"
7/2/2013 c1 misyx
Favorite bit: "...the most sanitary position"
7/2/2013 c24 misyx
Welcome back! Thank you for reposting and continuing. I really missed these characters. You have a terrific knack for LMAO humor that is also touching (double entendre intended - don't forget the latex). The new chapter and our unexpected narrator epitomize both of those qualities: the funny and the so-sour-it came back around to sweet.

Thank the FSM I kept you on alert!
6/30/2013 c24 Guest
I like the orderly ldy. And she is giving him a gift. Letting him play. I bet he has been visualizing the songs. Perhaps even composing for Bella. Let's get him out of this place please.
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