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4/25/2014 c19 101Jedi Master Misty Sman-Esay
In all honesty this had promise but was very hard to read. I was disappointed because it was so difficult to read because of grammar mistakes.

Also if this is truly rated M it isn't where it belongs: you have it rated T.
9/1/2013 c15 19Esrelda Snape
I'm sorry about your riding accident. I ride as well, and I've been thrown more times than I care to remember. I feel your pain. I am enjoying your story so far. My only suggestion is to seak the aid of a beta reader to help you fix up the grammer,and the general flow. Feel free to PM me any time you want to talk horses. LOL.
8/7/2013 c18 Pudding Babies
I'm not here
8/2/2013 c19 LoveInTheBattleField
This story was awesome and amazing, and I enjoyed it!
7/22/2013 c18 Nich31
Thanks for the update! Looking forward to more!
7/21/2013 c18 LoveInTheBattleField
Can't get enough, keep it coming.
7/19/2013 c17 LoveInTheBattleField
Keep it coming
7/18/2013 c17 Nich31
Hey, I missed you! Thanks for the update! I'll be looking forward to more!
7/13/2013 c16 LoveInTheBattleField
More, keep it coming.
7/13/2013 c16 Nich31
Short, but still good! Can't wait for more!
7/12/2013 c15 Nich31
I sure hope you are ok! Hey! I'm still here! I just got caught up with your story! Please don't stop now!
7/10/2013 c15 LoveInTheBattleField
Keep it coming.
7/9/2013 c14 LoveInTheBattleField
Keep it coming.
7/8/2013 c13 LoveInTheBattleField
Loving both chapters, keep it coming.
7/4/2013 c11 LoveInTheBattleField
Keep it coming.
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