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3/3/2019 c12 Guest
I saw your new slam dunk fanfic just now and I can't help but wonder if you have any plans on finishing this fanfic. Are you? Please say yes. Truth be told this is the first SD fic I have read so it would be wonderful if you'd finish this. Hope you do.!
6/2/2018 c12 Star7
Ahhh, I finally read to the end. So sorry for not following along with this before. I know the feeling of writing into the void, and it ain't a good one at all.
Pacing is good. I still like your portrayal of Rukawa best ;) I think you've missed out on the character of Myagi a bit, I mean, he's there but he ain't THERE, if you know what I mean.
This last chapter has been great in terms of plot twists.
You've sort of written yourself into a corner by fore-shadowing Rukawa's showdown with Sendoh in the finals (so you're sort of obliged to make Ryonan win over Kainen) unless you can come up with something rather epic. Like, Sendoh gets injured before the match, or, a sudden emergency elsewhere pales the significance of the Winter Games hugely. Huh. I'm sure you can think of something. That's what year-long hiatus between chapters is for, right? Right.
I'm with you on that.
8/24/2016 c12 ImaBored
Please continue and update faster
8/17/2016 c12 7ofhustlersandastronauts
Interesting twist, there. When did Shohoku get so evil? Probably after Akagi left, I suppose. For a team of troublemakers, that is probably what they would do. I've read Laziness Incarnate's fic as well, and it represents the best Uozumi-Sendoh dynamic.

Also, I'm still laughing at Rukawa's lies he told Sendoh over the phone from the previous chapter. That bit made my day.
5/25/2016 c9 ofhustlersandastronauts
Hey!

I've silently been reading this fic for some time now (and coincidentally I was also reading it last night because I needed a dose of Sendoh, haha) and thought I'd leave a review bc thanks for updating!

So Ryonan's gonna face off with Kainan, eh? ;) Let's see how Sendoh puts up with Maki. And I think that the SenRu friendship is just perfect, as those two aces are somewhat similar in their drive and passion for basketball. I've always thought that Sendoh and Rukawa would be very good friends (all the yaoi in other fics are fun and all, but hey, let them keep their hands off each other lol) and you've perfectly captured that in your fic. I like how Rukawa is still in character, yet slowly opening up to Sendoh.

And the SenAya pairing is cute, even though there's not too much action, but it's still there. :) I'm all for the odd pairings in the SD universe. Though poor Miyagi.

Also, the sprinkling of humour is awesome: Coach Takato breaking his leg playing golf? HAHA. And I can just see Coach Taoka's memoir, written by Taoka Moichi, sources from Aida Hikoichi, with maybe about ten whole chapters dedicated to the best players he'd ever coached, Sendoh Akira!

Possibly the best thing overall about your fic is that we get a view of how things go from Ryonan's side. It's just simply refreshing.

Keep it up! :)
7/29/2015 c7 2iam-jp
I'm off for work but had to stop by to read this! Hey, this wasnt so bad! I kinda enjoyed it! :D I found myself laughing when Maki emerged from the sea? Lol! I knew he was a surfer or some sort but the thought of him 'conquering' the sea was-well, it had me chuckling. Anyway... as you know, I am a senru hard shipper but I am very happy with their small interactions here as friends :D Plus, the date seemed 'real' to me because, you cant really expect anything special to happen on the first date (or was it a date? or a coincidence perhaps) loL! and yes, i feel this story in the sense that it seemed impossible for them to be together but somehow, there might be a small chance somewhere? (something like that, i know, im sorry i cant seem to express myself well) so there, basically i know you're probably starting on your hiatus thing but i will be waiting for the next chapter!

btw, about the pho restaurant? is that a vietnamese word? i was just surprised because i recently ate on a vietnamese resto too! it has a 'pho' word on it, basically i ate noodles -_- lol!
7/19/2015 c6 Its jp
An upppddaatttee! I envy you youre so fast! _ i liked this one! Hahaha.. i was so happy ryonan finally won! and i like the game details. They seemed legit to me. Youre awesome. :D plus the scene with sen and ayako had me gsmiling to myself..im trying not to giggle alot lol! _ i can imagine the scene, it was cute. Of course i was a bit surprise that sendoh finally told ayako that he liked her and wow, rukawa?..hahahha. is he eavesdropping by any chance? Cmon rukawa kun befriend sendoh already.. i am dying to see ur firendship thing go on. Ahahah!

*kaiser went bugeyed* (i know where ur getting at..)

I like the fact that he seemed finally mature to handle the loss.. hihihi.. thanks for the update kaiser! _ im happy for coach taoka as well,hahahah! :D
7/17/2015 c5 iam-jp
I'm back, I'm here! ) Well, its good to see you writing this one down and seems like you really have time now. Uhm, I'm going to be honest with you, I honestly don't know of your intentions with this fic, there's no rusen and that sen-ayako thing as you've mentioned is still quite vague, but I can see that somehow you're trying to probably squeezed that one in, I don't know... lol! :D nonetheless, i'm contented with the thought that you intended for this to be a friendship fic nonetheless between sen and ru! :D hahaha! that alone is enough for me to stay and read I guess. Oh, and if ever you change your mind about making this a sen-ayako fic finally, pls do so... I am intrigue you see, hahah! oh, please let Ryonan win this time! Hikoichi playing is something I am quite surprised as well, lol! :D hooray for coach taoka, my favorite coach! hahah! :D cheers!
6/18/2015 c2 iam-jp
Kaiser its me! hello! Glad to see you updating this! I must admit that it saddened me when you said that there's not going to be anymore RuSen stuff, lol! But I decided to stick around and read anyway because your fic intrigues me! Hahah! Nonetheless, i'm a very shallow person and that single line from Sendoh when he said that 'no woman could ever come between us' is enough to have me a goofy smile. hahaha! *Kaiser sweatdrops* Okay, let's see that Sen-Ayako thing happen! :D :D
1/15/2015 c1 jp
Hi there.. im not sure how to review this but; i kind of find this interesting. It seems to me that u do have the habit of pairing sendoh with ayako..not that im against it. I honestly think thats possible as well-but im a big fan of yaoi and senru so.. _ well, if u plan of making this sen-ayako anyhow, i wouldnt mind-im happy to have 'read' any tad bit hints of senru in it-hooe i did not blabber much. Plus, i kinda like the way u write-seems professional enough. Cheers! Hope youd continue this though.
2/2/2014 c1 Guest
what kind of story is this?
6/30/2013 c1 Star7
Tintinnabulated? seriously? hahahaha.
I love almost all of this. I mostly love your cracks at Rukawa's "personality" and your tongue in cheek humour - you have a serious gift for sarcastic comedy. Sendoh's speech (or more likely Taoka's reaction to it) was also awesome.
I wasn't, however, convinced by Sendoh's sudden explanation of everything to Rukawa. Things went a bit weird towards the end there. Either, it doesn't match Sendoh's personality (I believe he's probably just as closed-lip as Rukawa is about his personal worries, although I certainly agree he would most definitely have them) OR there just wasn't enough affinity between Sendoh and Rukawa yet to warrant such an outpouring.
AyaSen doesn't do it for me somehow o.o I wait with trepidation to see if you can make me change my mind.
6/28/2013 c1 mrsklemzak
Yes this has an interesting beginning! What are Rukawas thoughts? Will Sendoh be able to win Ayako? Even though there will always and forever be only one man for her and that's the precious and awesome Ryota.

Also, what is the hesitation on Rukawas part? Ayako is more like a big sister to everyone, specially the Sakuragi army. And Haruko. Does rukawa feel something not so little brotherly about her? Or does he have a thing for Sendoh?

Ugh, questions questions. Write on, Sensei!

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