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10/3/2022 c5 6PlatinumInk -ed
This is the saddest way I've seen a lazy author end a fanfiction. If they are too lazy to keep writing or can't think or anything else to write and don't want to admit it, they kill off the main characters in a silly way and be done with it. Seriously. At least it wasn't extraordinary writing in general (and beside you claiming to do, I didn't cry once), so it wasn't as bad, I guess.

By the way: Drinking one glass of bleach will not kill you instantly. It takes about 2 hours, if you had more than one mouthful (which I expect in Jacks case, since it also makes your body want to vomit it out, meaning Jack would've ended up with a stomach ache and a slightly burned stomach lining, which would heal in a two week span.

Let's assume that Jack wouldn't have to vomit instantly and that he drank at least one glass (0.4 l), to make it a plausible scenario (aside from the fact that jack is immortal). Jack is still often visited and after his meeting with the other guardians this morning, they would be very worried about Jack (like they were before). So it's almost guaranteed that they would check on him pretty soon after he left the room. This would result in him being found quickly, then saved and put back on suicide watch, allowing/forcing him to heal during that time and boom: Jack's 'foolproof' suicide plan goes down the drain. I've never seen that many plot holes in a short fanfiction, and I've read the entirety of 'My Immortal' as a dare.

You probably won't see this anyway cause it's been a while but I needed to get this off my chest to cope with the ridiculousness that is this ending. Lazy writing and nothing else... my opinion. ; )
Have a nice day! :D
4/17/2022 c5 Joud914
Oh... That was sad I didn't expect this but you know what
Not all people get their happy ending
11/11/2021 c5 1DonkayBallz
After this many years, this is still one of my fave Rotg fics!
8/20/2021 c5 LavaLilly
Wait a minute here your just gonna it on that note?!
11/10/2020 c5 WillWont
8/4/2020 c5 10AAu.27
I was sort of expecting this and still I ended up frowning in shock and contemplation.
8/4/2020 c4 AAu.27
Shoot! When I've read the part, "It's okay though, your blood is invisible just like the rest of you", I think my heart just broke.
7/6/2020 c5 DrakoJ
What does drinking a glass of bleach do? For Jack, at least?
7/6/2020 c4 DrakoJ
Oh, man. . . That's. . . Dang. Is this what insanity feels like?
7/6/2020 c3 DrakoJ
Dang. . . ! Jack's life has basically been a living hell, ever since he was rejected by the Guardians.
6/14/2020 c5 5Neko-fire demon tempest
Alright of all the ways to go that is very painful; after all of that, I don't know why I was expecting a happy ending.
4/29/2020 c5 3InsanityIsNormal2004
This is soooooo sad. And disturbing. But I love it that you for all your awesome hard work.
3/6/2020 c5 1evergreen-icy
Sure he may not die, but that's just make it more of a tragic than it already was. Long life sucks, but a eternal life with pain, betrayal and loneliness is unbearable. I don't think stay alive is the happy ending here. Death should be a blessing to the beyond-repaired lonely immortal boy. I hope death take pity on him and took him to his family... Well but this is Jack we are talking about! Maybe he failed with this attempt and finally be himself again, live his happy life, gaining friendship and love and believers, that would be better!
12/26/2019 c5 Guest
Tylenol isn't a fast death either,by - you litterally die because waste can't be filtered by the appropriate organs.

If Jack wants to off himself hanging himself would be the best bet- it takes aproximatley four (4) to six (6) minutes to die.
12/26/2019 c5 Guest
It takes a lot more than a glass of bleach to kill a person immediately.

Sure it fucks up your organs- just like downing a bottle of tylenol would- but your looking at days of a slow painful death if you don't get medical treatment. Weeks to months to years if you do get treated.
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