
8/6/2014 c1
39Susie G
This is beautiful! I love the descriptions and words you chose they were very fitting! I love how in this we get to see what Hotch feels and I love how you brought in Haley but yet there was Emily to help him through and most of all I like how when you spoke about Emily you used her and she right until the very end. Very good and you are a fantastic writer! Love it!

This is beautiful! I love the descriptions and words you chose they were very fitting! I love how in this we get to see what Hotch feels and I love how you brought in Haley but yet there was Emily to help him through and most of all I like how when you spoke about Emily you used her and she right until the very end. Very good and you are a fantastic writer! Love it!
6/30/2013 c1 Guest
ooooh, very interesting start. more please :)
ooooh, very interesting start. more please :)