for ciphers11/9/2015 c1 nhrc
A broad smile and bright eyes.
This is how My face looks like in the end of the last line.
I love it.
A broad smile and bright eyes.
This is how My face looks like in the end of the last line.
I love it.
8/17/2015 c1 
144Mislav
Very hot and a great character study of Sherlock. I like how you described the events post "Heroine".
My favorite parts
"For once, he doesn't have much to say back at her. He smiles instead. Normally, he doesn't like to let his face speak for him because he's never gotten the hang of hiding his emotions, the incessant things they are. They come out in a quivering chin; they come out when he punches and kicks objects in anger; when he's perplexed, his eyebrows arch like obtuse angles on his forehead. It's a goal of his to become an excellent liar."
"When he's calculated that she's gone safely downstairs, he has a wank under the spray. He lets the thoughts of her overflow like abundant candy; sticky chocolate syrup pouring over fingers; summer peach juice dripping from a chin; testing the syringe before it enters the skin to see the heroine spurt out like the best orgasm of his life. Only for the minute it takes, he imagines her pink breasts and her legs wide for him, and the warm water from the faucet is her come in his mouth."
"This is his partnership attached to need attached to adoring, splendid companionship. It's sickening. It feels as though nothing will take it, not Moriarity nor Sherlock himself. He thinks it's been this way all along."
144MislavVery hot and a great character study of Sherlock. I like how you described the events post "Heroine".
My favorite parts
"For once, he doesn't have much to say back at her. He smiles instead. Normally, he doesn't like to let his face speak for him because he's never gotten the hang of hiding his emotions, the incessant things they are. They come out in a quivering chin; they come out when he punches and kicks objects in anger; when he's perplexed, his eyebrows arch like obtuse angles on his forehead. It's a goal of his to become an excellent liar."
"When he's calculated that she's gone safely downstairs, he has a wank under the spray. He lets the thoughts of her overflow like abundant candy; sticky chocolate syrup pouring over fingers; summer peach juice dripping from a chin; testing the syringe before it enters the skin to see the heroine spurt out like the best orgasm of his life. Only for the minute it takes, he imagines her pink breasts and her legs wide for him, and the warm water from the faucet is her come in his mouth."
"This is his partnership attached to need attached to adoring, splendid companionship. It's sickening. It feels as though nothing will take it, not Moriarity nor Sherlock himself. He thinks it's been this way all along."
11/12/2013 c1 Jen4850
Hot and just sweet enough.
Hot and just sweet enough.
7/7/2013 c1 27CharmingNotDarling
"It's a rare occasion where he doesn't know what will happen next"... Love this. Love the whole thing... Wonderful descriptive language and amazing characterization... I feel that most readers aren't patient enough for work based on thought and description... In most cases (in my opinion) the lack of conversation keeps the story so much more true to form and focus... And I feel that's exactly what you've done... I hope you post again soon!
27CharmingNotDarling"It's a rare occasion where he doesn't know what will happen next"... Love this. Love the whole thing... Wonderful descriptive language and amazing characterization... I feel that most readers aren't patient enough for work based on thought and description... In most cases (in my opinion) the lack of conversation keeps the story so much more true to form and focus... And I feel that's exactly what you've done... I hope you post again soon!
7/7/2013 c1 25Forensiphile
This as great. You kept the characterization intact throughout. Very well done.
25ForensiphileThis as great. You kept the characterization intact throughout. Very well done.
7/1/2013 c1 48hophophop
I love the way you describe his difficulties with eye contact, and you have some fantastically evocative description: panic in tear ducts, her tossed bed, his dream of being painted, the malignant thoughts, uneasy mouth.
(apologies for unsolicited copyediting, but "He can't bare the weight of it" should be "bear", and I think you mean intercept instead of intercede.)
48hophophopI love the way you describe his difficulties with eye contact, and you have some fantastically evocative description: panic in tear ducts, her tossed bed, his dream of being painted, the malignant thoughts, uneasy mouth.
(apologies for unsolicited copyediting, but "He can't bare the weight of it" should be "bear", and I think you mean intercept instead of intercede.)
6/30/2013 c1 128serenitymeimei
Good gods, that was so hot and perfect and so completely them. I loved it!
128serenitymeimeiGood gods, that was so hot and perfect and so completely them. I loved it!
6/30/2013 c1 r
Amazing. Absolutely loved it.
Amazing. Absolutely loved it.