for A Third Path to the Future3/21 c19 BeyondTheDive
There is a very cute and rather fun harry potter/transformers cross where Harry falls through the veil and comes out the other side a Sparkling. The author has had to permanently so back from writing, but invites others to take up the stories. If I can find it again, I'll send you apm -
Salmon r, I'm six days into absolutely bingeing the crap out of this, my god is amazing!
There is a very cute and rather fun harry potter/transformers cross where Harry falls through the veil and comes out the other side a Sparkling. The author has had to permanently so back from writing, but invites others to take up the stories. If I can find it again, I'll send you apm -
Salmon r, I'm six days into absolutely bingeing the crap out of this, my god is amazing!
3/7 c53 ShankZZ
It is incredibly lame how easy you have allowed this invasion after all the world building. But for all I love about this story. Why did Harry become a coward about the titan aspect he even said he wouldnt be unready again to immedately procrasanate till now. so now thousands are dieing so he can prepare his ritual he should have already done. Which will no doubt lead to Jean ending up at Thantos mercy making this story suddenly shift to the lame cliche route.
It is incredibly lame how easy you have allowed this invasion after all the world building. But for all I love about this story. Why did Harry become a coward about the titan aspect he even said he wouldnt be unready again to immedately procrasanate till now. so now thousands are dieing so he can prepare his ritual he should have already done. Which will no doubt lead to Jean ending up at Thantos mercy making this story suddenly shift to the lame cliche route.
3/6 c41 ShankZZ
You have destroyed my Jean character for me, and damaged Harry's. That she is gambling or bartering the very souls of her children because she is tired of being on the bench. Nobody is even upset with her bugs me way more than anything else in this story.
You have destroyed my Jean character for me, and damaged Harry's. That she is gambling or bartering the very souls of her children because she is tired of being on the bench. Nobody is even upset with her bugs me way more than anything else in this story.
3/4 c53 Shadowkragg
Glad to see this back, however how come the X-men and Polaris are suddenly fighting in Washington DC, when did they land and got involved in the fighting, last we saw Polaris was also on Fortress Mars when did that change? Theres a part where you discuss they had trouble landing etc. but dont seem to say why. Also when did Storm decide to start teleporting troops in as well as evacutating civilians?
Don't get me wrong I love the chapter and your writing, just it feels like there is a big chunk of writing missing or something.
Glad to see this back, however how come the X-men and Polaris are suddenly fighting in Washington DC, when did they land and got involved in the fighting, last we saw Polaris was also on Fortress Mars when did that change? Theres a part where you discuss they had trouble landing etc. but dont seem to say why. Also when did Storm decide to start teleporting troops in as well as evacutating civilians?
Don't get me wrong I love the chapter and your writing, just it feels like there is a big chunk of writing missing or something.
3/1 c54 bhusanb098
You should post more or simply abandon this ..move on from this plot quickly...Thanos getting boaring after watching his movies
You should post more or simply abandon this ..move on from this plot quickly...Thanos getting boaring after watching his movies
2/24 c27 ScythH02
I love this story, Im on my 100-something reread. I vant believe i never noticed this on my past read throughs, but you keep saying Amara and Nova Roma are Greek. My understanding was that Nova Roma was created by descendants of the Roman Empire. That makes Amara Italian not Greek.
I love this story, Im on my 100-something reread. I vant believe i never noticed this on my past read throughs, but you keep saying Amara and Nova Roma are Greek. My understanding was that Nova Roma was created by descendants of the Roman Empire. That makes Amara Italian not Greek.
2/20 c54 Dudley D Dudley
THANKYOU, THANKYOU, THANKYOU this is one of the best stories on this site. Looking forward to what happens next.
THANKYOU, THANKYOU, THANKYOU this is one of the best stories on this site. Looking forward to what happens next.
2/21 c51 mspears3175
the insult from odin with hela's "reward" should not have been aloud! that worthless parasite should have been force to answer for his "joke" after being saved from his own stupidity!
the insult from odin with hela's "reward" should not have been aloud! that worthless parasite should have been force to answer for his "joke" after being saved from his own stupidity!
2/19 c54 Mari Wollsch
super great, love this chapter, can't wait for whats next xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
super great, love this chapter, can't wait for whats next xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
2/19 c54 bastidaswilliam2005
FFFFFFFFIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNAAAAAAAALLLLLYYYYYYY a new chapter has come to fanfictionnnnnn the waiting was worth it
FFFFFFFFIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNAAAAAAAALLLLLYYYYYYY a new chapter has come to fanfictionnnnnn the waiting was worth it
2/19 c7 Dretnuh
Honestly crazy to me how you could call two geoups equal and then literally calling one of the two groups “Homo-SUPERIOR” it’s like okayyyy…. You might be saying they’re equal but you are also very blatantly calling one of the groups superior to the other lmao.
Honestly crazy to me how you could call two geoups equal and then literally calling one of the two groups “Homo-SUPERIOR” it’s like okayyyy…. You might be saying they’re equal but you are also very blatantly calling one of the groups superior to the other lmao.
2/19 c29 dillanrodman
i do have to wonder why your harry feels like a greater good harry which kinda pisses me off considering how he was treaterld
i do have to wonder why your harry feels like a greater good harry which kinda pisses me off considering how he was treaterld