for Love for the Broken2/24/2015 c17 blueaoineechan
Wow, I missed this story. Katara and Zuko are going on their own adventure! I really do hope Azula and Iroh are alright. Can't wait for next chapter! :D
Wow, I missed this story. Katara and Zuko are going on their own adventure! I really do hope Azula and Iroh are alright. Can't wait for next chapter! :D
2/2/2014 c15 
121Kimberly T
Well, that both answers a few questions, and opens up many more questions.
First question to my mind is, what daemon is possessing Aang? One with a personality very like Long Feng or Sozin, I think; someone who Must Control Everything.
121Kimberly TWell, that both answers a few questions, and opens up many more questions.
First question to my mind is, what daemon is possessing Aang? One with a personality very like Long Feng or Sozin, I think; someone who Must Control Everything.
1/2/2014 c13 Alex
There is something that bothers me ... in The Plan (part 1 and 2) we see Katara waterbending ... i sliding , trying to heal Zuko , even a little bit of bloodbending if i'm not wrong ... then in chapter 9 Time to try to move on , you tell us that Aang took away her bending ... now maybe i haven't payed enough attention to the details , but , which one is correct ? Katara still has or doesn't have her bending anymore ?
There is something that bothers me ... in The Plan (part 1 and 2) we see Katara waterbending ... i sliding , trying to heal Zuko , even a little bit of bloodbending if i'm not wrong ... then in chapter 9 Time to try to move on , you tell us that Aang took away her bending ... now maybe i haven't payed enough attention to the details , but , which one is correct ? Katara still has or doesn't have her bending anymore ?
12/14/2013 c13 Kimberly T
The bit about opening the book changing you and leaving voices arguing in your head, reminds me of the first movie they made of Terry Pratchett's works, The Colour of Magic. I'll admit I'm curious to see where you go with this, and if ultimately that book is what caused such a huge change in Aang as well.
The bit about opening the book changing you and leaving voices arguing in your head, reminds me of the first movie they made of Terry Pratchett's works, The Colour of Magic. I'll admit I'm curious to see where you go with this, and if ultimately that book is what caused such a huge change in Aang as well.
11/13/2013 c12 KJun
I know that Aang is an immature selfish bastard. There should be a resolution in this story whether it be death, exorcism, or the Avatar Spirit being severed from him by TPTB in the Spirit World and given to a worthy stand-by that no one knew the Spirit World had because no one had ever failed at being Avatar as epically as Aang had or something! Letting this go unpunished just sends the wrong message. I'm not talking about revenge. I'm talking about real justice and consequences for one's actions.
Kat
I know that Aang is an immature selfish bastard. There should be a resolution in this story whether it be death, exorcism, or the Avatar Spirit being severed from him by TPTB in the Spirit World and given to a worthy stand-by that no one knew the Spirit World had because no one had ever failed at being Avatar as epically as Aang had or something! Letting this go unpunished just sends the wrong message. I'm not talking about revenge. I'm talking about real justice and consequences for one's actions.
Kat
11/13/2013 c12 2the Moon our Witness
I'm curious what Azulas story with Katara is! (: and about what the spiceberry book is doing please update soon
2the Moon our WitnessI'm curious what Azulas story with Katara is! (: and about what the spiceberry book is doing please update soon
11/13/2013 c12 Artemis's Bow
Great! A new update! *does a happy dance*
I love the Azula in this story, she is so similar to the brocken Katara in this story, so she understands. And I feel soooo sorry for Katara, really "how can she be herself when she can't bend?"
Great! A new update! *does a happy dance*
I love the Azula in this story, she is so similar to the brocken Katara in this story, so she understands. And I feel soooo sorry for Katara, really "how can she be herself when she can't bend?"
9/24/2013 c7 Guest
Is aang beating her? Good job with Azula, I like that there is one story where she isn't portrayed a a phycho that's hated by everyone
Is aang beating her? Good job with Azula, I like that there is one story where she isn't portrayed a a phycho that's hated by everyone
8/22/2013 c11 jen
Ummm... I think you put this chapter in the wrong story
Ummm... I think you put this chapter in the wrong story
8/23/2013 c11 1Gatene
I love the Avatar world. I have been working on an outline of a fanfic myself. But anyway, at first I was a little appalled by the changes you made, especially after seeing Korra. But after reading others' reviews, I could totally see the perspective you went with, and fell in love with the story, and cannot wait to read the rest. Having multiple POVs is a nice touch too. I can't wait to find out what the book actually is, how Zuko and Katara's relationship unfolds, how she was able to bend after Aang took her bending, etc. Keep up the fic.
1GateneI love the Avatar world. I have been working on an outline of a fanfic myself. But anyway, at first I was a little appalled by the changes you made, especially after seeing Korra. But after reading others' reviews, I could totally see the perspective you went with, and fell in love with the story, and cannot wait to read the rest. Having multiple POVs is a nice touch too. I can't wait to find out what the book actually is, how Zuko and Katara's relationship unfolds, how she was able to bend after Aang took her bending, etc. Keep up the fic.