for Reading Mosgem's (Percy Jackson Style) Brotherband Chronicles10/19/2020 c2 
1HJP ROX
Now that you mentioned it was referencing something I got it awesome story and would love for it to continue!
1HJP ROXNow that you mentioned it was referencing something I got it awesome story and would love for it to continue!
7/18/2017 c1 catspats31
Despite the good writing quality that your story has, I'll give you a heads up that the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken:
Entries not allowed:
3. MST: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story.
You should move it to a site where MSTs are allowed like deviantART.
Despite the good writing quality that your story has, I'll give you a heads up that the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken:
Entries not allowed:
3. MST: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story.
You should move it to a site where MSTs are allowed like deviantART.
7/26/2013 c2 8Mosgem
I realize I haven't reviewed this chapter. Sorry!
Love the OC's so much- more creative than anything I could've come up with. Again, thanks so much for doing this and update!
8MosgemI realize I haven't reviewed this chapter. Sorry!
Love the OC's so much- more creative than anything I could've come up with. Again, thanks so much for doing this and update!
7/2/2013 c1 Guest
You might want to change your title to: Reading the Percy Jackson Style: Brotherband Chronicles" or something along the lines. People may get confused that you are copying from the actual Brotherband series and report you for it.. Just like we report every idiot that copies from Rick's book.
You might want to change your title to: Reading the Percy Jackson Style: Brotherband Chronicles" or something along the lines. People may get confused that you are copying from the actual Brotherband series and report you for it.. Just like we report every idiot that copies from Rick's book.
7/2/2013 c1 allen r
very cool story so far. maybe the fates could bring percy and annabeth in after they start dating lol
very cool story so far. maybe the fates could bring percy and annabeth in after they start dating lol
7/2/2013 c1 8Mosgem
Yes! This is awesome! And by the whole council do you mean Theron? Cause that would be interesting.
As an author I think that Hector and Stelios are two of my favourite characters to write about, and watching them fool around I'm this is awesome. The dialog is good and in character, and I like the way you set it up.
The only thing I would suggest for this story would be a little more talking to break up the book parts. In my opinion, if you were able to have more than two-line conversations it would improve the story.
Then again I've never been able to write these kinds of stories, so great Job and do what you will with it! I'll keep reading
8MosgemYes! This is awesome! And by the whole council do you mean Theron? Cause that would be interesting.
As an author I think that Hector and Stelios are two of my favourite characters to write about, and watching them fool around I'm this is awesome. The dialog is good and in character, and I like the way you set it up.
The only thing I would suggest for this story would be a little more talking to break up the book parts. In my opinion, if you were able to have more than two-line conversations it would improve the story.
Then again I've never been able to write these kinds of stories, so great Job and do what you will with it! I'll keep reading