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5/29/2019 c1 LunaLavender10
I love it . Diary of a wimpy kid and H.P. are 2of my fav. book series
3/18/2019 c1 charlie sheen
fabulous. absolutley amazing. best read in a long time
9/27/2015 c1 Fuzz da Writer
An amazing story, I' sure your nephew will grow up to be an awesome writer.
8/15/2014 c1 Anon
This is... well, it's better then most of the stuff on this website, but it could use some work. The spelling is great (thank god) and there is some really good sentence structure!
The only things I can suggest are maybe making the chapters longer, and some dialogue. Also some appropriate punctuation without periods for every sentence.

Still, I've met fifteen year old girls who make this look like professional writing their work is so horrid.
7/3/2013 c1 sky123
WRITE MORE!
7/2/2013 c1 12Princess Unikitty
for an eleven year old, this is really really good! he just needs to work on his sentence structure and grammar a bit. can't wait to see more.

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