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9/27/2013 c4 xDarklightx
I like it. Update soon.
9/22/2013 c4 1MLM24
Really good!
7/4/2013 c3 Albany
Me gusto mucho este capitulo.
That I wrote is Spanish so I can make my comments or translate with google, you choose.
I like this Alex are normal I think almost former spy and intrigue me as the story will continue.
Answer me if you can.
Update soon
7/4/2013 c2 Guest
X ... Lol jk. I like it so far, keep going.
7/3/2013 c2 Albany
I really like this episode, Alex was leading Don Quixote went in and came out in the abused and consiguiun defenza new friend, this is very good because he has to have a fresh start.
To me it seems very logical that you want input on your writing, whether it is good, if there is good grammar, I also would want to do with me that if I had the talent to write.
Update soon.
7/3/2013 c2 15scamp87
X haha Ill add more... This was really good and go alex! I love when he beats ppl up:) it reminded me of how Tom became friends with Alex too! Keep up the good work!
7/3/2013 c2 a person
I really like where this story is going. just a note, the dialogue between Alex and Edward seems unnatural. Otherwise good chapter!

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