
4/26 c15 Daggerxxx
Honestly, these are some very problematic, downright troubled ladies. Are they worth it? And all the romance in this chapter was reduced to some kind of forcedness. In short, the aftertaste is unpleasant.
Honestly, these are some very problematic, downright troubled ladies. Are they worth it? And all the romance in this chapter was reduced to some kind of forcedness. In short, the aftertaste is unpleasant.
4/17 c1 Daggerxxx
It's already possible to say that most of the girls in the fanfic will be problematic. They think too much of themselves. I would stay away from such people, there will be fewer problems.
It's already possible to say that most of the girls in the fanfic will be problematic. They think too much of themselves. I would stay away from such people, there will be fewer problems.
3/18 c22 Guest
Wow. This is dog I a good story. Amazing work. You sure a gifted writer and I thank you for sharing your story with us.
Wow. This is dog I a good story. Amazing work. You sure a gifted writer and I thank you for sharing your story with us.
3/5 c22 LtKettch
What a cliffhanger. This story is so much fun to read! I hope you are able to continue it. Thanks for sharing.
What a cliffhanger. This story is so much fun to read! I hope you are able to continue it. Thanks for sharing.
2/17 c22 Stickman6969
Holy! What a great chapter and an even better (read awful) cliffhanger! Very well done! Can’t wait for the next chapter
Holy! What a great chapter and an even better (read awful) cliffhanger! Very well done! Can’t wait for the next chapter
2/3 c12 Glitner
so harry is like a second son to the weasley .. and percy girlfreind is getting ganked in the bathroom ... and he just leave it be ? not even telling percy ? ... thats kinda dick move talk about being a bad freind .. i mean even if they are just barley freind level ... he is really good freinds with everyone else in the family.. you think he say something ... kinda dick move to be honest
so harry is like a second son to the weasley .. and percy girlfreind is getting ganked in the bathroom ... and he just leave it be ? not even telling percy ? ... thats kinda dick move talk about being a bad freind .. i mean even if they are just barley freind level ... he is really good freinds with everyone else in the family.. you think he say something ... kinda dick move to be honest
2/1 c22 vjedi729
I really enjoyed this chapter. The mysterious descriptions of the Forbidden Forrest were great!
I really enjoyed this chapter. The mysterious descriptions of the Forbidden Forrest were great!
1/30 c22 McGeezel
Wasnt sure what Harry had left after the tree started to get chopped up. Did not see the dark patronus coming. Pretty cool.
Wasnt sure what Harry had left after the tree started to get chopped up. Did not see the dark patronus coming. Pretty cool.
1/28 c22 Guest
Another great chapter. Thank you.
Another great chapter. Thank you.