for Harry Potter and the Two Flowers7/26/2022 c19 
2TheMaelstorm'sVengeance
Please, Please, Please. Keep going, please. Please. Keep Going. This is perfection at it's finest quality. Please, Please, Please. I need to see it to the end. This story is already top five and I don't even know how it ends. You are too good at writing to finish here. Please, Please, Please.
2TheMaelstorm'sVengeancePlease, Please, Please. Keep going, please. Please. Keep Going. This is perfection at it's finest quality. Please, Please, Please. I need to see it to the end. This story is already top five and I don't even know how it ends. You are too good at writing to finish here. Please, Please, Please.
7/26/2022 c12 reviewer
Haha, love that percy's girlfriend cheated on him with Krum.
Haha, love that percy's girlfriend cheated on him with Krum.
7/11/2022 c19 carza
Wow just stumbled upon your work and I was immediately hooked! Such a good story! I hope you’ll pick it up again but then again one year is not that much! Totally understandable that real life came in between or something happened but I’ll drop a follow and a favorite and hope you’ll one day continue!
Wow just stumbled upon your work and I was immediately hooked! Such a good story! I hope you’ll pick it up again but then again one year is not that much! Totally understandable that real life came in between or something happened but I’ll drop a follow and a favorite and hope you’ll one day continue!
6/4/2022 c17 Surgeon Johnson
My goodness this story has me hooked, your writing is so incredibly detailed. It is some of the best I’ve seen on the platform, I hope you continue to enjoy doing it. Same as I enjoy reading it.
My goodness this story has me hooked, your writing is so incredibly detailed. It is some of the best I’ve seen on the platform, I hope you continue to enjoy doing it. Same as I enjoy reading it.
4/26/2022 c1 FrostyBehemoth
Bro I can't even man, he just hands hus fucking wand over? Are you kidding me? Like no, just fucking no. Out of all the things you could've done to showcase his inexperience, you make him hand over his literally only method of protection? Just like that? So he didn't learn from the chamber of secrets? When he dropped his wand and was completely defenceless afterwards? You could've simply had him let his guard down then BAM in the back. But you actually made him hand over his FUCKING wand bro, that's not inexperience, that's just plain fucking dumb. You've got to be a fucking retard to hand over your wand when THERE ARE STILL DEATH EATERS RUNNING AROUND, FUCKKKKKK. Was actually looking forward to this story, only for him to do that, literally ruins the whole fucking thing for me. Cause you made do some dumb fucking shit for plot, WHEN HE DIDN'T EVEN HAVE TO DO IT FOR PLOT. Literally just have him turn his back on them, trusting them for one second then BAM. But instead you do that dumb shit. Fuck me.
Bro I can't even man, he just hands hus fucking wand over? Are you kidding me? Like no, just fucking no. Out of all the things you could've done to showcase his inexperience, you make him hand over his literally only method of protection? Just like that? So he didn't learn from the chamber of secrets? When he dropped his wand and was completely defenceless afterwards? You could've simply had him let his guard down then BAM in the back. But you actually made him hand over his FUCKING wand bro, that's not inexperience, that's just plain fucking dumb. You've got to be a fucking retard to hand over your wand when THERE ARE STILL DEATH EATERS RUNNING AROUND, FUCKKKKKK. Was actually looking forward to this story, only for him to do that, literally ruins the whole fucking thing for me. Cause you made do some dumb fucking shit for plot, WHEN HE DIDN'T EVEN HAVE TO DO IT FOR PLOT. Literally just have him turn his back on them, trusting them for one second then BAM. But instead you do that dumb shit. Fuck me.
4/16/2022 c19 Spider of Dreams
I really hope you continue this, I've been following this since you first started and when you started updating again last yeah I was more hyped then I prolly should've been lol. I hope everything at home and in your life is going well, and that you're in good health. Just please don't abandon this fic.
I really hope you continue this, I've been following this since you first started and when you started updating again last yeah I was more hyped then I prolly should've been lol. I hope everything at home and in your life is going well, and that you're in good health. Just please don't abandon this fic.
3/15/2022 c16 Ppsh
I gave you a lot of shit for the bad fights earlier on, and I have to say you did turn it around with this Dueling championship. It felt quite sensible and was enjoyable to read, and Harry finally showed some real competence and power.
I gave you a lot of shit for the bad fights earlier on, and I have to say you did turn it around with this Dueling championship. It felt quite sensible and was enjoyable to read, and Harry finally showed some real competence and power.
3/15/2022 c15 Ppsh
Really hoping Daphne the mary sue gets her ass handed to her. Can't stand how conceited she is, she's almost as bad as those centaurs.
Really hoping Daphne the mary sue gets her ass handed to her. Can't stand how conceited she is, she's almost as bad as those centaurs.
3/14/2022 c11 Ppsh
I know I was pretty negative about the fight stuff, but I should take the time to say that everything else is pretty good. You get a lot of details down pat and the way things are more fleshed out is interesting. It really drives home how empty the actual Triwizard tournament really was. Not to mention 2/3 of the tasks weren't even visible to the spectators.
I'm not really sure why Harry got picked as Seeker however, since you made him perform abysmally. He seemed to clown out every single moment of his qualifier. This goes back to you making him underperform in battle too; I think you just take it too far. There's a fine line between being challenged and being a hopeless fool, and you almost always step over it, leaving the reader with the impression that Harry isn't in fact talented, competent or impressive at all, and yet despite that he still wins and succeeds and people praise him for it. It feels incongruent.
I know I was pretty negative about the fight stuff, but I should take the time to say that everything else is pretty good. You get a lot of details down pat and the way things are more fleshed out is interesting. It really drives home how empty the actual Triwizard tournament really was. Not to mention 2/3 of the tasks weren't even visible to the spectators.
I'm not really sure why Harry got picked as Seeker however, since you made him perform abysmally. He seemed to clown out every single moment of his qualifier. This goes back to you making him underperform in battle too; I think you just take it too far. There's a fine line between being challenged and being a hopeless fool, and you almost always step over it, leaving the reader with the impression that Harry isn't in fact talented, competent or impressive at all, and yet despite that he still wins and succeeds and people praise him for it. It feels incongruent.
3/14/2022 c10 Ppsh
Ugh, are you really doing the whole "Daphne is actually a really nice, sweet girl deep down, she just wears a 'mask' of an ice cold bitch to defend herself" thing? Wasn't it bad enough that you already made her a total Mary Sue? I don't even understand the focus on that irrelevant bint, given that this story is titled in a way that makes it obvious Harry will wind up with Fleur and Jasmin.
The fight with Cedric wasn't terrible, nor great. Well, it was fine by itself, but you seem to always edge towards making things overly difficult for Harry - which is the opposite of what I expect a Dumbledore-trained prodigy to experience when going up against literal school children.
Harry took out like 8 Death Eaters, but you make it sound like he would struggle against 2 Cedric Diggories or 2 Miles Bletchley's. Which is inane. You describe how the fight really took it out of him, and then contradict it by having Daphne be surprised/scared by the fact that Harry never moved in his fight, as if he was really a total badass who didn't struggle at all. It can't be both. Either the fight was easy or it was hard, you can't have it both ways.
Ugh, are you really doing the whole "Daphne is actually a really nice, sweet girl deep down, she just wears a 'mask' of an ice cold bitch to defend herself" thing? Wasn't it bad enough that you already made her a total Mary Sue? I don't even understand the focus on that irrelevant bint, given that this story is titled in a way that makes it obvious Harry will wind up with Fleur and Jasmin.
The fight with Cedric wasn't terrible, nor great. Well, it was fine by itself, but you seem to always edge towards making things overly difficult for Harry - which is the opposite of what I expect a Dumbledore-trained prodigy to experience when going up against literal school children.
Harry took out like 8 Death Eaters, but you make it sound like he would struggle against 2 Cedric Diggories or 2 Miles Bletchley's. Which is inane. You describe how the fight really took it out of him, and then contradict it by having Daphne be surprised/scared by the fact that Harry never moved in his fight, as if he was really a total badass who didn't struggle at all. It can't be both. Either the fight was easy or it was hard, you can't have it both ways.