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1/5/2018 c3 lovebooks2042
more please
10/17/2015 c3 FantasticFairy40
cool and write the rest
10/11/2015 c3 NatsuLucy4ever555
Keep writing.
9/17/2015 c3 7Myra the Dovahkiin
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
1/22/2015 c3 SquigglyFox
plz keep going
12/3/2014 c3 Guest
i love it
6/13/2014 c3 Guest
It is kind of short no offense but I want to know what happens next
4/13/2014 c1 Awkwardasthon
i WAS a sten or bella shipper but now i hate (shiver) car-toon ne-network (shiver) si i don't really care about cartoon shipping i still have a tinyest as a molicule for bella (ben-stella)
4/9/2014 c3 OmnitrixWielder1124
4/4/2014 c2 OmnitrixWielder1124
4/2/2014 c2 Guest
best story ever only problem is I don't get it
7/13/2013 c2 rosetrang628
Oooh I can just see romantic sparks flying just now between Bloom & Ben " I'll come with you' just might soon be, anyways when will you update I'm anxious please tell me, oh and will there be chemistry between Ben & Bloom,
please tell me I won't tell anyone please I love stories and I promise it's seems like a good story! oh and good luck!
7/7/2013 c2 69ShadowRogue9799
use speechmarks it makes it easier to what a character is saying and what is just part of the story
use more description, will guarentee more readers
I like your idea and can't wait to see what happens when they realize what eachother can do

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