for Yukina's Quest1/5/2014 c11 
1Feather of Darkness
I really loved this story. It was light and funny (particularly the last chapter), and made a perfect Sunday morning read. I think you did a great job portraying Yukina, who like Hiei grew up mostly alone, and thus should have a darker side. I liked that while on the surface she seemed to need Hiei's protection, in reality she handled her own battles. Well done. :)
1Feather of DarknessI really loved this story. It was light and funny (particularly the last chapter), and made a perfect Sunday morning read. I think you did a great job portraying Yukina, who like Hiei grew up mostly alone, and thus should have a darker side. I liked that while on the surface she seemed to need Hiei's protection, in reality she handled her own battles. Well done. :)
8/31/2013 c1 DragonSiren7
This story was REALLY good! I must admit, one of my favorite parts was BAMF Yukina! She was awesome, and I totally agree that there must be a darker side to her. Great job!
This story was REALLY good! I must admit, one of my favorite parts was BAMF Yukina! She was awesome, and I totally agree that there must be a darker side to her. Great job!
8/31/2013 c10 Jessica
Great ending I vote for all three add soon as u can thanks
Great ending I vote for all three add soon as u can thanks
8/30/2013 c10 21Shelia13
Well that was...umm...I'm not to sure how to react to the bat situation it's kind of just like 'um' but also like yup...I knew she was strong this whole time. It takes a strong person to be humble, soft, sweet and innocent all at the same time. Because you become a target so it's even harder to keep the ' nice-ness' up so it takes a REALLY strong person.
And yay! She knows now!
And oh my gosh I always wanted to see Kuwabara's reaction. I always did; mostly I thought it'd be hilarious.
21Shelia13Well that was...umm...I'm not to sure how to react to the bat situation it's kind of just like 'um' but also like yup...I knew she was strong this whole time. It takes a strong person to be humble, soft, sweet and innocent all at the same time. Because you become a target so it's even harder to keep the ' nice-ness' up so it takes a REALLY strong person.
And yay! She knows now!
And oh my gosh I always wanted to see Kuwabara's reaction. I always did; mostly I thought it'd be hilarious.
8/19/2013 c8 Jessica
Hiei's secret needs to come out add more hurry thanks
Hiei's secret needs to come out add more hurry thanks
8/19/2013 c9 Shelia13
Oh my gosh Kagome's well...that one had me laughing so hard...please be a choke referring to the Inuyasha's bone eater's well...unless that's an actual place because then I'm laughing like a fool over here...
And aww poor Hiei, I think he's actually possibly maybe hurt by Yukina's reaction/realization I think she was just trying to reject that he didn't tell her sooner. So she's rejecting the idea because he's spent so much time NOT telling her.. Well anyway can't wait for more!
Oh my gosh Kagome's well...that one had me laughing so hard...please be a choke referring to the Inuyasha's bone eater's well...unless that's an actual place because then I'm laughing like a fool over here...
And aww poor Hiei, I think he's actually possibly maybe hurt by Yukina's reaction/realization I think she was just trying to reject that he didn't tell her sooner. So she's rejecting the idea because he's spent so much time NOT telling her.. Well anyway can't wait for more!
8/19/2013 c8 Shelia13
Cute! I liked it...but I would like to inform you that something happened to your formatting between each space is this symbol
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I'm not too sure what that stands for but I've had problems with my own programs before and was just wondering if that was a problem or part of the story
Cute! I liked it...but I would like to inform you that something happened to your formatting between each space is this symbol
_-yp
I'm not too sure what that stands for but I've had problems with my own programs before and was just wondering if that was a problem or part of the story