for Yukina's Quest8/6/2013 c7 
21Shelia13
Creeps! How dare they go after Yukina! And oh look Kurama has come along...I think...or is he in his Youko form? He's still the same person it's all good. Possibly. Anyway can't wait for more! Reading this story is always somehow able to make me smile!
21Shelia13Creeps! How dare they go after Yukina! And oh look Kurama has come along...I think...or is he in his Youko form? He's still the same person it's all good. Possibly. Anyway can't wait for more! Reading this story is always somehow able to make me smile!
8/2/2013 c6 DokiDoki0725
This chapter was longer this time but still short cuz u spaced or paragraphed one or two sentences. But other than that the sory was great and I hope u updated soon!
This chapter was longer this time but still short cuz u spaced or paragraphed one or two sentences. But other than that the sory was great and I hope u updated soon!
7/24/2013 c6 21Shelia13
I just started reading this but I want more! Please oh my gosh I can't wait to see where this is going!
21Shelia13I just started reading this but I want more! Please oh my gosh I can't wait to see where this is going!
7/24/2013 c1 Shelia13
I don't know why, but I'm laughing...i think I find their relationship as siblings cute...Great work! Can't wait to read more!
I don't know why, but I'm laughing...i think I find their relationship as siblings cute...Great work! Can't wait to read more!
7/22/2013 c5 120Dark Calamity of Princess
ah sorry that I didn't reply your PM before, I do know how to write but I don't know how to explain it to you, English isn't my first language after all. You can try to learn from book or ju art search the tutorial in google.
Once again, this chapter is too short, there are almost no progress of the story at all. You should write and learn more. But, anyone can't do it in one try, huh? Keep writing and do your best
120Dark Calamity of Princessah sorry that I didn't reply your PM before, I do know how to write but I don't know how to explain it to you, English isn't my first language after all. You can try to learn from book or ju art search the tutorial in google.
Once again, this chapter is too short, there are almost no progress of the story at all. You should write and learn more. But, anyone can't do it in one try, huh? Keep writing and do your best
7/15/2013 c4 Dark Calamity of Princess
nice fic
but your writing is kinda messy (but I have no rights to complain since my grammar is bad), your paragraphs, the dialogs, I suggest you should fix that
but nice fic by the way, I just hope you could make the chapter a bit longer
update soon
nice fic
but your writing is kinda messy (but I have no rights to complain since my grammar is bad), your paragraphs, the dialogs, I suggest you should fix that
but nice fic by the way, I just hope you could make the chapter a bit longer
update soon