for Perlia2/23/2023 c1 Queen of Random
When you said that the end was going to be Percabeth I've never been more disappointed in a fanfic :( (it's well written, though, I just really dislike Percabeth)
When you said that the end was going to be Percabeth I've never been more disappointed in a fanfic :( (it's well written, though, I just really dislike Percabeth)
12/18/2021 c1 Hugh Murray-King
When Thalia made sure she was unconscious I was like I think that is completely normal
When Thalia made sure she was unconscious I was like I think that is completely normal
11/24/2020 c2 Guest
THAT WAS TOO QUICK. NO TRANSITIONS. ALSO IM NOT YELLING. MY COMPUTER IS STUCK IN CAPS FOR SOME REASON.
THAT WAS TOO QUICK. NO TRANSITIONS. ALSO IM NOT YELLING. MY COMPUTER IS STUCK IN CAPS FOR SOME REASON.
9/25/2020 c2 Guest
Dude stop rushing , I know this is fan fiction but even this is a low .. I’m not criticising but seriously , don’t rush things up... it seems more like a summary than a story.. I hope you understood.. There is a value even in the simplest things ..., so please don’t rush things up...
Dude stop rushing , I know this is fan fiction but even this is a low .. I’m not criticising but seriously , don’t rush things up... it seems more like a summary than a story.. I hope you understood.. There is a value even in the simplest things ..., so please don’t rush things up...
7/13/2019 c2 Guest
Way to get straight to the point
Way to get straight to the point
1/22/2019 c11 Guest
Can I please continue it
Can I please continue it
4/17/2017 c11 Guest
Before anyone gets mad at the author for this being way to OCC, this story isn't actually theirs. It says the chapters 1-8 are Son of Jupiter 12's yet those are the only chapters in this story
Before anyone gets mad at the author for this being way to OCC, this story isn't actually theirs. It says the chapters 1-8 are Son of Jupiter 12's yet those are the only chapters in this story
3/3/2015 c11 Guest
YOUR DOOM IS HERE (AKA ME)
YOUR DOOM IS HERE (AKA ME)
7/5/2014 c2 Guest
To goddamn motherfucking cheap fucking collage of decent fics biggest price of fucking shit I've read
To goddamn motherfucking cheap fucking collage of decent fics biggest price of fucking shit I've read
1/28/2014 c5 Breeze
I AM ABOUT TO PUKE! For real. Just eww... I love Perlia, but this must be a crack fic. If not... Wow, you've really perfected the art of making your readers queasy. I've almost lost hope in fanfiction...
I AM ABOUT TO PUKE! For real. Just eww... I love Perlia, but this must be a crack fic. If not... Wow, you've really perfected the art of making your readers queasy. I've almost lost hope in fanfiction...
1/28/2014 c4 Breezy
Okay, ewww! This is just so out of character! Waaaayyy cheesy and too grossly mushy gushy! "soul-mate", "my love", "lightning angel"? What the...? I love Perlia - my OTP - but I am about to puke.
Okay, ewww! This is just so out of character! Waaaayyy cheesy and too grossly mushy gushy! "soul-mate", "my love", "lightning angel"? What the...? I love Perlia - my OTP - but I am about to puke.
1/28/2014 c3 Guest
LOL!
LOL!
1/28/2014 c2 Breeze
Movin' a little fast there don't you think?
Movin' a little fast there don't you think?
1/3/2014 c2 Guest
Ugggghhh... You just created major Mary Sues.
Ugggghhh... You just created major Mary Sues.