for The Importance of Recognition5/12/2019 c1 Guest
Why can’t they make Sasuke more affectionate in the anime! This could totally be a Great episode!
Why can’t they make Sasuke more affectionate in the anime! This could totally be a Great episode!
9/18/2016 c1 Guest
Loved it :)
Loved it :)
2/11/2016 c1 Scarlet1234808
I thought this story was amazing! I can't wait to see the real thing!
I thought this story was amazing! I can't wait to see the real thing!
9/11/2015 c1 Fire
That was beautiful.
That was beautiful.
9/20/2014 c1 Nita
Uhmmm is that realy Sasuke...?!
Uhmmm is that realy Sasuke...?!
4/3/2014 c1 dramalover 10
that was pretty good!
that was pretty good!
7/30/2013 c1 Raikiri80
I liked this prompt a lot, Sasuke never thinks of Sakura as weak. But from Sakura's perspective it seemed that wasnt clear. I wanted to see their argument though. I enjoyed reading this very much :)
I liked this prompt a lot, Sasuke never thinks of Sakura as weak. But from Sakura's perspective it seemed that wasnt clear. I wanted to see their argument though. I enjoyed reading this very much :)
7/16/2013 c1 
48Joy-girl
It's very cute! I especially love the way you portray Sasuke. One little bit of constructive criticism though - watch out for your tense. You repeatedly shifted from past to present.
[Ex:
Sakura hiccupped, and then laughed again. "Oh my God, you should see the look on your face."
Sasuke furrows his eyebrows. "You're crying. While laughing."]
Otherwise, the story itself is great and the characters are written very well. Good job!
48Joy-girlIt's very cute! I especially love the way you portray Sasuke. One little bit of constructive criticism though - watch out for your tense. You repeatedly shifted from past to present.
[Ex:
Sakura hiccupped, and then laughed again. "Oh my God, you should see the look on your face."
Sasuke furrows his eyebrows. "You're crying. While laughing."]
Otherwise, the story itself is great and the characters are written very well. Good job!