for Another world7/5/2018 c1 
3PinkRose235
wow, I came across this while I was looking for Paul stories and your writing is great and it's realistic which a lot of people don't seem to bother with
3PinkRose235wow, I came across this while I was looking for Paul stories and your writing is great and it's realistic which a lot of people don't seem to bother with
1/13/2015 c4 Guest
You know what? I simply LOVE it when people mention Katie. She's one of my favourite (minor) characters from PJatO and HoO, but guess what? Nobody gives her ANY credit, even though she played an important part in TLO's battle. She guarded the Brooklyn Battery Tunnel.
Or Miranda Gardiner.
Or Demeter, if it comes to that.
NOT EVEN RICK RIORDAN. Do you guys agree?
I wish everybody gave Katie, Miranda and Demeter just a little more attention, other than Tratie stories.
Anyway, thanks a LOT for writing this!
You just made my day. :D
You know what? I simply LOVE it when people mention Katie. She's one of my favourite (minor) characters from PJatO and HoO, but guess what? Nobody gives her ANY credit, even though she played an important part in TLO's battle. She guarded the Brooklyn Battery Tunnel.
Or Miranda Gardiner.
Or Demeter, if it comes to that.
NOT EVEN RICK RIORDAN. Do you guys agree?
I wish everybody gave Katie, Miranda and Demeter just a little more attention, other than Tratie stories.
Anyway, thanks a LOT for writing this!
You just made my day. :D
3/16/2014 c4 3CookiesCream333
This-this is really good writing. I never read such I good Paul story. I'm in a loss of words. I can't wait for the next chapter.
3CookiesCream333This-this is really good writing. I never read such I good Paul story. I'm in a loss of words. I can't wait for the next chapter.
7/22/2013 c3 2doubles12
this is really good. i've never read anything in paul's pov and i love how you kept him in character
2doubles12this is really good. i've never read anything in paul's pov and i love how you kept him in character
7/10/2013 c2 Xtine
Please update!
Please update!
7/7/2013 c1 anonymous
great! can't wait for the next chapter! :)
great! can't wait for the next chapter! :)